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Re: Take from me

Postby Eedee » Feb 11th, '13, 09:43

Solace wrote:I like the song and both verses but I agree with Slim Cary about

It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe
I have nothing else to give you, nothing left to contribute
Farewell I bid you, but before I go, my last gift to you
Ladies and gentlemen, Slaughterhouse I give you!

I've always felt this part is terrible and is flowed so awkwardly.


I always that flow as incredible. It felt so smooth, IMO.

And that part is him being hella sarcastic. He's obviously not quitting and he obviously doesn't believe he has nothing left to contribute.
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Re: Take from me

Postby righfield » Feb 17th, '13, 14:33

I liked the song when I first heard it and still like it now HOWEVER not as much as I use to em just disappoints me, I mean in his prime if em had something tosay he would just come out and say it yet he just speaks crypticly here IF you can even call the verse cryptic. He just goes on about the same old same old blah blah blah fame blah blah blah hailie. That all worked with the tes, encore and recovery but it dosent work here. If the songs about songs leaking just say its about songs leaking... he could of made a great verse about how hes a perfectionist about how these leaks harmed his legacy in HIS eyes and drove home point that music and his daughters were his life and it would of worked but he didnt ether out of lazyness or upsetting stans. I guess we will never know but its a disappointment really imo
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Re: Take from me

Postby Snakebeast » Feb 18th, '13, 06:50

righfield wrote:I liked the song when I first heard it and still like it now HOWEVER not as much as I use to em just disappoints me, I mean in his prime if em had something tosay he would just come out and say it yet he just speaks crypticly here IF you can even call the verse cryptic. He just goes on about the same old same old blah blah blah fame blah blah blah hailie. That all worked with the tes, encore and recovery but it dosent work here. If the songs about songs leaking just say its about songs leaking... he could of made a great verse about how hes a perfectionist about how these leaks harmed his legacy in HIS eyes and drove home point that music and his daughters were his life and it would of worked but he didnt ether out of lazyness or upsetting stans. I guess we will never know but its a disappointment really imo


Your grammar is bad and you should feel bad. (kinda agree though)
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Re: Take from me

Postby whiteamerica2 » Feb 20th, '13, 19:29

"theyll appreciate me when im gone, they say it was ill right the way i kill mics" that line was very good.. however if he would have thought of something just a tad bit better than the following line it would be amazing.
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