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Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Eedee » Nov 22nd, '13, 08:22

Rhymes are a bit off, but yeah, that part is good!
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby unmissingpiece » Nov 22nd, '13, 22:27

Eedee wrote:Rhymes are a bit off, but yeah, that part is good!

sorry! New to this rhyme highlighting stuff. :sweating:
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Nov 22nd, '13, 23:53

unmissingpiece wrote:
Eedee wrote:Rhymes are a bit off, but yeah, that part is good!

sorry! New to this rhyme highlighting stuff. :sweating:


Good attempt regardless. :y:

You could also include:

leaving this world, this evening /even my girls, can see I'm

A missed syllable: try and hide it/high and mighty
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby unmissingpiece » Nov 22nd, '13, 23:56

Innovation wrote:
unmissingpiece wrote:
Eedee wrote:Rhymes are a bit off, but yeah, that part is good!

sorry! New to this rhyme highlighting stuff. :sweating:


Good attempt regardless. :y:

You could also include:

leaving this world, this evening /even my girls, can see I'm

A missed syllable: try and hide it/high and mighty

Okay, I'll add those :happy:
I wasn't sure how close the rhyme had to be, if that makes sense.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby JustEnjoytheMusic » Nov 23rd, '13, 13:05

Coulter wrote:
Eedee wrote:I ain't here to save the fucking children
But if one kid out of a hundred million
Who are going through a struggle feels and then relates, that's/ that's great
It's payback, Russell Wilson falling way back in the draft
Turn nothing into something, still can make that, straw into gold chump
I will spin Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
Maybe I need a straight jacket / jacket face facts, I am nuts for real
But I'm okay with that, it's nothing, I'm still friends with the...


You could add that yo.


Does that work? Not so sure... Something doesn't add up.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby RKOunion » Nov 24th, '13, 17:40

One day I plan to be a family man, happily married
I wanna grow to be so old that I have to be carried
'til I'm glad to be buried and leave this crazy world
And have at least a half a million for my baby girl
It may be early to be planning this stuff
Cause I'm still struggling hard to be the man, and it's tough
Cause man it's been rough, but still I manage enough
I've been taken advantage of, damaged and scuffed, my hands have been cuffed
But I don't panic and huff, frantic and puff
Or plan to give up, the minute shit hits the fan it erupts
I'm anteing up double or nothin, I've been troubled enough
And
I'm sick of strugglin and sufferin, see
My destiny's to rest at ease, 'til I'm impressed and pleased
With my progress, I won't settle for less than cheese
I'm on a quest to seize all, my own label to call
Way before my baby is able to crawl
I'm too stable to fall, the pressure motivates
To know I hold the weight of boulders on my shoulder blades
I seen the golden gates to heaven on Earth
Where they don't pull a weapon on you when you steppin on turf
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Malphas » Dec 3rd, '13, 03:19

I wish this got updated.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Sea triscuit » Dec 8th, '13, 18:25

RKOunion wrote:One day I plan to be a family man, happily married
I wanna grow to be so old that I have to be carried
'til I'm glad to be buried and leave this crazy world
And have at least a half a million for my baby girl
It may be early to be planning this stuff
Cause I'm still struggling hard to be the man, and it's tough
Cause man it's been rough, but still I manage enough
I've been taken advantage of, damaged and scuffed, my hands have been cuffed
But I don't panic and huff, frantic and puff
Or plan to give up, the minute shit hits the fan it erupts
I'm anteing up double or nothin, I've been troubled enough
And
I'm sick of strugglin and sufferin, see
My destiny's to rest at ease, 'til I'm impressed and pleased
With my progress, I won't settle for less than cheese
I'm on a quest to seize all, my own label to call
Way before my baby is able to crawl
I'm too stable to fall, the pressure motivates
To know I hold the weight of boulders on my shoulder blades
I seen the golden gates to heaven on Earth
Where they don't pull a weapon on you when you steppin on turf


^What song is this?
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby unmissingpiece » Dec 8th, '13, 18:30

^ It's OK, from Infinite
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Sea triscuit » Dec 9th, '13, 01:57

unmissingpiece wrote:^ It's OK, from Infinite

Oh thanks, haven't listened to Infinite in a long time but that verse looks real nice
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby unmissingpiece » Dec 10th, '13, 00:27

Sea triscuit wrote:
unmissingpiece wrote:^ It's OK, from Infinite

Oh thanks, haven't listened to Infinite in a long time but that verse looks real nice

np! I think it's my favourite song on the album. His rhyming>>
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Kei- » Dec 30th, '13, 16:16

Wow this thread is great. I tried to highlight all the rhymes in Stay Wide Awake a while ago, I can post it if someone's interested.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby unmissingpiece » Jan 12th, '14, 19:19

Kei- wrote:Wow this thread is great. I tried to highlight all the rhymes in Stay Wide Awake a while ago, I can post it if someone's interested.

Sure, SWA is awesome!
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Kei- » Jan 12th, '14, 21:29

I love SWA and I was like HOW MANY FUCKING RHYMES ARE THERE REALLY?! Lmao so here you are, I didn't remember it being so colorful though. (did this during an intense procrastination moment before exams ha, might have some mistakes + I'm not a native speaker etc etc)
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