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Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 22nd, '13, 01:40

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Hows Rap God going?


SHE'S SO BEAUTIFUL.

forreal doe (even though I meant my statement above), I saw that this thread went back like 4 pages since the last time I'd checked it and just knew there'd be a new verse highlighted. Such disappointment.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Oct 23rd, '13, 16:44

Rollefsen wrote:Image


Hows Rap God going?


That's beauty tbh. :wub:
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Oct 26th, '13, 00:33

Menzo wrote:I'm not sure if I should just make the new thread when RG is done.


Might as well, especially with MMLP2 coming out very soon.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby CrashBand » Oct 30th, '13, 01:26

Accor wrote:yikes
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Nov 3rd, '13, 14:16

Working on So Far atm. Going to send Menzo the first verse to look over a bit later. :y:

Revolutionary wrote:Brainless please :D


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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Eedee » Nov 6th, '13, 05:22

I'd love to see Headlights.

Nate's part at the end (and all his parts) were written by Em, it seems.

Because I put my faith in my new girl, so I never say goodbye cruel world

Could also argue for this:

Because I put my faith in my new girl, so I never say goodbye cruel world

Also:

Because I put my faith in my new girl, so I never say goodbye cruel world
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby LK5 » Nov 13th, '13, 18:22

Menzo wrote:Sorry guys, the thread's a mess lol.

RG is done except the third verse, that's about 80-85% done.

So where is it?
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Eedee » Nov 14th, '13, 20:16

Backs to the wall, I’m stacking up all them odds
Toilets clogged, yeah cause I’m talking a lot of shit but I’m backing it all up
But in my head there’s a voice in the back and it hollers
After the track is demolished; I am your lack of a conscience
I’m the ringing in your ears
I’m the polyps on the back of your tonsils
Eating your vocal chords after your concerts
I’m your time that’s almost up that you haven’t acknowledged
Grab for some water but I’m that pill that’s too jagged to swallow

Dat part.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Innovation » Nov 14th, '13, 23:12

Eedee wrote:Backs to the wall, I’m stacking up all them odds
Toilets clogged, yeah cause I’m talking a lot of shit but I’m backing it all up
But in my head there’s a voice in the back and it hollers
After the track is demolished; I am your lack of a conscience
I’m the ringing in your ears
I’m the polyps on the back of your tonsils
Eating your vocal chords after your concerts
I’m your time that’s almost up that you haven’t acknowledged
Grab for some water but I’m that pill that’s too jagged to swallow

Dat part.


You could probably add "talking a lot of" to that too.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Eedee » Nov 14th, '13, 23:29

Damn son. Good call.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Malphas » Nov 16th, '13, 17:14

I wanna see some MMLP2 songs Q_Q
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Eedee » Nov 17th, '13, 04:50

I ain't here to save the fucking children
But if one kid out of a hundred million
Who are going through a struggle feels and then relates, that's/ that's great
It's payback, Russell Wilson falling way back in the draft
Turn nothing into something, still can make that, straw into gold chump
I will spin Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
Maybe I need a straight jacket / jacket face facts, I am nuts for real
But
I'm okay with that, it's nothing, I'm still friends with the...

I kinda wanna put "nothing I'm still friends" into that red scheme, but syllables don't match up. Oh well. Say what you will about The Monster sounding like shit, Em puts in work.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Coulter » Nov 17th, '13, 05:24

Eedee wrote:I ain't here to save the fucking children
But if one kid out of a hundred million
Who are going through a struggle feels and then relates, that's/ that's great
It's payback, Russell Wilson falling way back in the draft
Turn nothing into something, still can make that, straw into gold chump
I will spin Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
Maybe I need a straight jacket / jacket face facts, I am nuts for real
But I'm okay with that, it's nothing, I'm still friends with the...


You could add that yo.
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby Eedee » Nov 17th, '13, 05:25

Actually it goes with the scheme.

"Nuts for real, but"
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Re: Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

Postby unmissingpiece » Nov 22nd, '13, 01:06

Don't know if this has been done, but there's some good rhyming in GTC's first lines
Lately I really, feel like I'm rolling for delph like Philly,
I feel like I'm losing control of myself, I sincerely,
Apologize if all that I sound like is I'm complaining,
But life keeps on complicating, an' I'm debating,
On leaving this world, this evening, even my girls,
Can see I'm
/I'm grievin', I try and hide it,
But I can't, why do I act like I'm all high and mighty,
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