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Postby UofLCard » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:23

I really dig the last verse.
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Re: Fine Line

Postby mdemaz » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:27

decent

thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever
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Re: Fine Line

Postby Mr Change » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:34

When I first heard this song I tried my best to not allow myself to overrate it because it was quickly becoming everyones favorite. But there's no denying--that last verse is downright perfect. One of the sweetest, emotional verses of Em's career.

"I still remember the times when
They were simpler than the rhymes of
Vanilla Ice were, when I was just killin' the mics
I'll never forget what that feeling was like"

Compact, witty, anecdotitish(?) but relevant opening bars


"Everything about it I miss
Which now reminds me
Put a thousand lighters in the sky for the Outsidaz"

The way he transitions from the things he misses from his life before fame into a talking about the Outsidaz is unexpected and abrupt yet feels so true and from the heart. Amazing delivery here.


"Zee you always supported me
You vouched, I will never forget that and
How you guys, accepted me for me and Pace
I love you too,"

The sincerity and raw emotion here is astounding, topped off with an overpowering I love you.

"Inside I'll always be an outsider
My life has been turned inside out but I"

Double entendre here is so smart and smoothly delivered

And above all that the entire thing is just written perfectly.

AND A INSTRUMENTAL OUTRO--WE NEED MORE OF THESE EM
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Re: Fine Line

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:37

mdemaz wrote:decent

thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever

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Re: Fine Line

Postby mdemaz » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:46

it was tho

sounded like a baby beat
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Re: Fine Line

Postby csw621 » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:47

I can't stand the way baby starts. Unpopular opinion?





Fine line best song on shady xv
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Re: Fine Line

Postby FriedSchizoprenic » Nov 22nd, '14, 04:57

8.5, great lyrics, but i dont like so much the beat.
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Re: Fine Line

Postby Mathers » Nov 22nd, '14, 11:16

I really like the beat, it reminds me off something off ''The Eminem Show'', great song.
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Re: Fine Line

Postby Kill You » Nov 22nd, '14, 12:18

I like the song a lot. 3rd favorite. The piano in the beat. :flutter:
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Re: Fine Line

Postby Raul » Nov 22nd, '14, 15:26

outro is great
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Re: Fine Line

Postby UofLCard » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:09

mdemaz wrote:decent

thought the beat was too wacky for an emotion storytelling thing but whatever


I like that the 'wackiness' of the beat mellows out in the last verse.
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Re: Fine Line

Postby Mr Change » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:11

i never thought the beat sucked tbh
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Re: Fine Line

Postby Hamza1972 » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:50

Yeah, the beat is suck...
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Re: Fine Line

Postby SajN » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:52

Good song
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Re: Fine Line

Postby DetroitSkills » Nov 22nd, '14, 20:54

great song, needs a demaz beat doe
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