

guesswhosback08 wrote:It's just underwhelming man. I love Eminem, I even posted this song on my facebook page because I'm so excited about anything new, but you cannot tell me that this is a great song, its better than 95% of rap that is out right now but for Him this is very average and exactly what I didn't want to hear from him. listen to stay wide awake, music box, forever verse, on fire, no love verse, and it's just more creative and interesting than this song. This song isn't very inspiring even though it is meant to be. He's just not flowing over the beat like I know he can. Third verse is tight and his voice sounds pretty crisp, I'm not saying it's total garbage by any means cause he spits hard, but I feel like its more of a track for high school kids and casual rap fans, obviously trying to appeal to the masses which is his right to do of course but I don't have to think it's great and I'm not gonna feel bad for calling a song what it is. Well go ahead have at it and tell me why this is better than Till I Collapse or whatever go into detail why you think this song is great because I'm genuinely interested, Hey it's all in fun, it's entertainment. So tell me why you enjoy this song so much, lyrics are tight but it doesn't sound all that great which is really kind of the point isn't it?

I also agree. The song is at best meh, nothing special.JAGODA wrote:I really like that shit but I have to agree with this post:guesswhosback08 wrote:It's just underwhelming man. I love Eminem, I even posted this song on my facebook page because I'm so excited about anything new, but you cannot tell me that this is a great song, its better than 95% of rap that is out right now but for Him this is very average and exactly what I didn't want to hear from him. listen to stay wide awake, music box, forever verse, on fire, no love verse, and it's just more creative and interesting than this song. This song isn't very inspiring even though it is meant to be. He's just not flowing over the beat like I know he can. Third verse is tight and his voice sounds pretty crisp, I'm not saying it's total garbage by any means cause he spits hard, but I feel like its more of a track for high school kids and casual rap fans, obviously trying to appeal to the masses which is his right to do of course but I don't have to think it's great and I'm not gonna feel bad for calling a song what it is. Well go ahead have at it and tell me why this is better than Till I Collapse or whatever go into detail why you think this song is great because I'm genuinely interested, Hey it's all in fun, it's entertainment. So tell me why you enjoy this song so much, lyrics are tight but it doesn't sound all that great which is really kind of the point isn't it?
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guesswhosback08 wrote: its better than 95% of rap that is out right now



Kill You wrote:For da haterz doe.


guesswhosback08 wrote: but I feel like its more of a track for high school kids and casual rap fans, obviously trying to appeal to the masses which is his right to do


classthe_king wrote:I'll respond. The song AT BEST is average. While it's not as terrible as most of his Recovery stuff and his other verses, it certainly isn't good when looking at the broad range of Hip-Hop atm.
The hook is just loud and obnoxious and sounds horrible.
The delivery is still terrible. While the screaming isn't out of place here, it still shouldn't have been used and sounds horrible. Nothing about it is genuine because Eminem isn't angry. When you listen to old Eminem or Kendrick now you hear an angry person who wants to release that anger on the track. When you listen to this song you hear someone who wants you to think he's angry but isn't at all. It really hurts the ear drums.
The flow, while isn't as scattered and all of the place as before, really isn't that good either. There are some spots where it's decent but other places the awkward pauses thrown in take away from the rhythm imo. Pretty much all the spots where he speeds up his flow real quick, pauses out of nowhere and then screams the end of the line are all examples of this.
The rhyming is actually good, no complaints there.
The lyrics are decent. He doesn't have nearly as many terrine punchlines but he does have a few (hands up like it's 12 noon, hop in and gun it like G-Unit without the hyphen, while I'm wiping my butt cause I just shitted on the mic). The only moment of brilliance was
"Cause you'll never take my pride from me
It'll have to be pried from me"
The rest of the song was face-value lyricism as deep as the surface with little to no depth or creativity in the way he got his message across. Pretty much the opposite of what I was saying about Kendrick in the backstage thread. Now, while this doesn't mean the lyrics are bad, it just means they're average. Nothing I would call good and certainly no where close to great.





Hopsinshadie wrote:It sounds like Eminem is continuing to rap just to rap. He's overdoing it and maybe the best course of action would be to tread lightly.


classthe_king wrote:I'll respond. The song AT BEST is average. While it's not as terrible as most of his Recovery stuff and his other verses, it certainly isn't good when looking at the broad range of Hip-Hop atm.
The hook is just loud and obnoxious and sounds horrible.
The delivery is still terrible. While the screaming isn't out of place here, it still shouldn't have been used and sounds horrible. Nothing about it is genuine because Eminem isn't angry. When you listen to old Eminem or Kendrick now you hear an angry person who wants to release that anger on the track. When you listen to this song you hear someone who wants you to think he's angry but isn't at all. It really hurts the ear drums.
The flow, while isn't as scattered and all of the place as before, really isn't that good either. There are some spots where it's decent but other places the awkward pauses thrown in take away from the rhythm imo. Pretty much all the spots where he speeds up his flow real quick, pauses out of nowhere and then screams the end of the line are all examples of this.
The rhyming is actually good, no complaints there.
The lyrics are decent. He doesn't have nearly as many terrine punchlines but he does have a few (hands up like it's 12 noon, hop in and gun it like G-Unit without the hyphen, while I'm wiping my butt cause I just shitted on the mic). The only moment of brilliance was
"Cause you'll never take my pride from me
It'll have to be pried from me"
The rest of the song was face-value lyricism as deep as the surface with little to no depth or creativity in the way he got his message across. Pretty much the opposite of what I was saying about Kendrick in the backstage thread. Now, while this doesn't mean the lyrics are bad, it just means they're average. Nothing I would call good and certainly no where close to great.



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