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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby SliK » Oct 22nd, '13, 09:14

Amadeo wrote:Didn't notice this one in Fight Music:

If I could capture the rage of today's youth and bottle it
I'd crush the glass with my bare hands and swallow it
And spit it back in the faces of you racists
And hypocrites who think the same shit but don't say shit

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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 22nd, '13, 11:03

I'm ice grillin you, starin you down with a gremlin grin
I'm Eminem, you're a fag in a women's gym
I'm Slim, the Shady is really a fake alias
To save me with in case I get chased by space aliens
A brainiac, with a cranium packed, full of more uranium
Than a maniac Saudi Arabian
A highly combustible head, spazmatic
Strapped to a Kraftmatic adjustable bed
Laid up in the hospital in critical condition
I flatlined; jumped up and ran from the mortician
High speed, IV full of Thai weed
Lookin Chinese, with my knees stuck together like Siamese
Twins, joined at the groin like lesbians
Uhh, pins and needles, hypodermic needles and pins
I hope God forgives me for my sins -- it probably all depends
On if I keep on killin my girlfriends

eminem rhyme scheme on any man was genius
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Amadeo » Oct 22nd, '13, 13:17

Mr.DGAF wrote:I've been meaning to type this one out but have been forgetting.

Rap God:

But fuck it, life's handing you lemons, make lemonade then
But if I can't batter the women, how the fuck am I supposed to bake them a cake then?

Didn't notice the internal on the first few listens.

It's stuff like this that proves that he's still got a lot of attention to detail in the rhyming department and still obsesses over words...even if he's delivering the rhymes in the same boring way Tech N9ne does and writing period jokes.

Get some people through tough times
But I gotta keep a few punchlines just in case cuz even you unsigned
Rappers are lookin' at me like it's lunchtime
I know there was a time where once I

How many verses I gotta murder to
Prove that if you were half as nice at songs you can sacrifice virgins too

Made a livin' and a killin' off it
Ever since Bill Clinton was still in office
With Monica Le-winsky feelin' on his
Nutsack, I'm an emcee, still as honest
But as rude and as inde-cent as all hell
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 22nd, '13, 15:06

Geno wrote:
Menzo wrote:^

"With Monica Lewinsky, feelin' on his nut sack
I'm an emcee, still as honest"

Am I the only one who thinks "handing/batter" don't rhyme :-k

No, cuz they don't.

That Monica Lewinsky scheme is my favourite in the whole song. So smooth


He was definitely going for that rhyme though, whether they match perfectly or not.

And yeah, te lewinsky scheme is pretty nice.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 22nd, '13, 15:37

Menzo wrote:^

"With Monica Lewinsky, feelin' on his nut sack
I'm an emcee, still as honest"

Am I the only one who thinks "handing/batter" don't rhyme :-k


they do rhyme well the first part

they both have that ae sound
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 22nd, '13, 16:00

StayWideAwake wrote:
ronnie56 wrote:
Menzo wrote:^

"With Monica Lewinsky, feelin' on his nut sack
I'm an emcee, still as honest"

Am I the only one who thinks "handing/batter" don't rhyme :-k


they do rhyme well the first part

they both have that ae sound

Yeah I think the way it's pronounced makes it sound like it's supposed to go together, but individually it doesn't look like a clean rhyme.



well it's not a perfect rhyme like hand and band , bat rat but it matches phoneticly speaking
what u think
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 22nd, '13, 17:05

Menzo wrote:I just can't see it rhyming unless there was an accent on it. I don't hear it either.


to me it is rhymes especially if u end it off with a perfect rhyme
like bat raid
hand made
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 22nd, '13, 18:04

Menzo wrote:Yeah, it could rhyme with an accent but again, I don't hear it.


when we gonna talk rhymes again ?
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Innovation » Oct 23rd, '13, 01:31

Menzo wrote:Symphony In H:

Kinda like Beethoven composin' a symphony of hate
So much hate woven into these raps
He stitches a bitch straight sewin'
Shit I'm beginnin’ to hate clothin’

whew!


I'm a bit late to reply, but nice catch.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Eedee » Oct 23rd, '13, 02:51

"Handing you lemons / batter the women" definitely rhymes the way he says it. He lengthens the "haaaanding" and "baaaatter" and makes it sound like it rhymes.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 23rd, '13, 05:51

bigray wrote:"Lemons / women" is far off to me but I can see "handing / batter" a little I guess. I've tried every accent and it still won't work.


Wait forreal? That first one is a straight up rhyme haha.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Eedee » Oct 30th, '13, 06:46

The Monster

My OCD is conking me in the head
Keep knocking, nobody's home, I'm sleepwalking

Keep knocking / sleepwalking

Obvious, but "conking me" is an inverse of that scheme.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby therapist » Oct 30th, '13, 06:57

Both of his verses on renegade continue like a 7 syllable rhyme for the entirety of each verse. It's incredible.
"Dope as shady though? Bitch, don't KID yourself. You ain't even a baby GOAT." -Em (Symphony in H)

Kid
/kid/ noun:
A baby goat.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 30th, '13, 07:13

Eedee wrote:The Monster

My OCD is conking me in the head
Keep knocking, nobody's home, I'm sleepwalking

Keep knocking / sleepwalking

Obvious, but "conking me" is an inverse of that scheme.


only multis i see in that verse nobody and and ocd.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 30th, '13, 07:22

StayWideAwake wrote:
ronnie56 wrote:
Eedee wrote:The Monster

My OCD is conking me in the head
Keep knocking, nobody's home, I'm sleepwalking

Keep knocking / sleepwalking

Obvious, but "conking me" is an inverse of that scheme.


only multis i see in that verse nobody and and ocd.

I never have any idea if you're serious or not


don't get mad at me because i don't believe in your stupid opinion that multis have to match in terms of syllable count bending words or none of that bullshit u be on.

and the only multis i see in that example is nobody and ocd.
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