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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Intruder » Nov 17th, '14, 11:14

This is probably his best rhyme ever:
Wrap you in rope and plastic,
Stab you with broken glass and
Have you with open gashes
Strapped to a soakin' mattress
4 repetitions of 7 Syllable rhymes
Or on Keeping It Raw:
I'm keepin' it raw,
Illegal like Malik and Jamal,
Cause I don't believe in the law,
Like I'm Steven Seagal
Flippin' off the police while I'm leapin' a wall
Take some Tylenol,then fall asleep in a mall
I got your little son,you'll be receivin' a call
You're lucky this little punk's still breathin' at all
Fuck the world,this how I get even at y'all
Pop shit,get rolled up and leave in a ball
I hit you in your mouth and sink your teeth in your jaws
You won't be able to eat shit,not even a malt
This lethal assault
Is givin' you a reason to stall
I'm cockin' this deuce deuce and I'm squeezin' it off
At the first burp,fart,sniffle,a sneeze and a cough
Get your arm chewed off like you were teasin' a dog
I'm cold enough and hot enough to freeze and unthaw
I'll kick my girl out in 10 degrees in her bra
You faggots turn yellow like the trees in the fall
I'm shittin' on rappers,(Where's Shady?) he's in the stall
All that's left of your niece is a piece of her doll
And all that's left of her puppy is a leash and a paw
23 repetitions of 4 Syllable rhymes
There's an intruder... in my house
He cut my phone line
... can't dial out
I scream for police
... but I doubt
They're gonna hear me
... when I shout
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Intruder » Nov 17th, '14, 15:26

StayWideAwake wrote:
Intruder wrote:This is probably his best rhyme ever:
Wrap you in rope and plastic,
Stab you with broken glass and
Have you with open gashes
Strapped to a soakin' mattress
4 repetitions of 7 Syllable rhymes


The "elevator surveillance" part actually goes on even longer. That's still one of my favorite Em rhymes though.

Waits for someone to say it's not as cool for some reason because "new Eminem" said it

yes but here he doesn't makes a pause,he rhymes every word,that's why it is so amazing
There's an intruder... in my house
He cut my phone line
... can't dial out
I scream for police
... but I doubt
They're gonna hear me
... when I shout
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Amadeo » Nov 18th, '14, 03:11

StayWideAwake wrote:Murder you on a fucking track like Tony Stewart bit is one of his best punchlines.

The Lana Del Rae scheme was my favorite, simply for how he made a well-known NFL news story rhyme perfectly, and the "celebrate with the Ravens" line reminds me of his golden-era humor.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby SliK » Nov 18th, '14, 04:29

Intruder wrote:
StayWideAwake wrote:
Intruder wrote:This is probably his best rhyme ever:
Wrap you in rope and plastic,
Stab you with broken glass and
Have you with open gashes
Strapped to a soakin' mattress
4 repetitions of 7 Syllable rhymes


The "elevator surveillance" part actually goes on even longer. That's still one of my favorite Em rhymes though.

Waits for someone to say it's not as cool for some reason because "new Eminem" said it

yes but here he doesn't makes a pause,he rhymes every word,that's why it is so amazing

Such cynisism when this isn't in my system
Blunt hypnotism lift a spliff up to my lips son

13 syllable rhyme in Buffalo Bill where he rhymes every word.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby shadyblogger » Nov 18th, '14, 04:32

Menzo wrote:This verse is literally too much to handle. So fucking dense.

"Try to acknowledge my mistakes, probably won't qualify
As a gentleman and a scholar, but it's time that I swallow pride
And say
that I'm sorry, sorry that I can't apologize"

Try to acknowledge my mistakes/time that I swallow pride and say


Probably my favorite rhyme scheme in the cypher tbh
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Nostradomus » Nov 18th, '14, 05:31

StayWideAwake wrote:Murder you on a fucking track like Tony Stewart bit is one of his best punchlines.


I hate to say it but Em actually isn't the first to use the Tony Stewart line. Battle rapper Charlie Clips said something about "killing on a track like Tony Stewart" or something similar. But I doubt Em actually heard Clips so I'm not accusing him of stealing of course.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby EminemInsider » Nov 18th, '14, 06:03

Nostradomus wrote:
StayWideAwake wrote:Murder you on a fucking track like Tony Stewart bit is one of his best punchlines.


I hate to say it but Em actually isn't the first to use the Tony Stewart line. Battle rapper Charlie Clips said something about "killing on a track like Tony Stewart" or something similar. But I doubt Em actually heard Clips so I'm not accusing him of stealing of course.


I would've been shocked if he was the first one to use it. That's the kind of news story begging for that line.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Intruder » Nov 18th, '14, 10:47

Such cynisism when this isn't in my system
Blunt hypnotism lift a spliff up to my lips son

13 syllable rhyme in Buffalo Bill where he rhymes every word.

so impressive... AMAZING :D
He's the best rhymer of all time for sure
There's an intruder... in my house
He cut my phone line
... can't dial out
I scream for police
... but I doubt
They're gonna hear me
... when I shout
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Intruder » Nov 18th, '14, 11:42

The whole Lose Yourself has so many rhyme schemes...
http://loseyourselflyrics.blogspot.com/
There's an intruder... in my house
He cut my phone line
... can't dial out
I scream for police
... but I doubt
They're gonna hear me
... when I shout
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Intruder » Nov 18th, '14, 11:44

http://images.rapgenius.com/599fb0e0f30 ... x112x1.jpg
All 3 verses from Infinite are really lyrical(rhymes,wordplays,metaphors...)
There's an intruder... in my house
He cut my phone line
... can't dial out
I scream for police
... but I doubt
They're gonna hear me
... when I shout
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Intruder » Nov 18th, '14, 11:57

1st Verse
nobody's gonna back you in the corner, you're a hornet
No one's more ignorant than you fucking four in the morning
You're at the la-bor-atory, storming like there's nothing that's more important
MC's you better consider this a formal warning,you're in for it

3rd Verse
So step inside of dementia, the demented side of a mind
That
's like the inside of an engine,while I multiply your undivided attention
But be reminded that if I didn't mention, I lose my mind and my temper
You'll be the first one who finds him offensive
Got him climbing the fences, lost some time to addiction
But look up rhyme in the dictionary,I'm in the picture
Eminem is the synonym forit, I'm an enigma
Fuck it, let's get to the meat balls, I'm gonna skip the
Veg and potatoes,edumacator
They are shit legends are made of,spit treachreous data
Shit that you would say to your worst enemy
This wretched is what you get when you mix Treach with a Jada
Eminem-Baby
But the whole song has amazing rhymes
There's an intruder... in my house
He cut my phone line
... can't dial out
I scream for police
... but I doubt
They're gonna hear me
... when I shout
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby csw621 » Nov 18th, '14, 14:34

Intruder wrote:The whole Lose Yourself has so many rhyme schemes...
http://loseyourselflyrics.blogspot.com/

Interesting, the difference between how he says "God only knows" in Lose Yourself and Stay Wide Awake.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby EminemInsider » Nov 19th, '14, 01:52

Then I could try to channel it through Cadillacs and Buicks
....
Then that's when you hit the roof because you can't sit through it
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Excita » Nov 19th, '14, 01:54

EminemInsider wrote:Then I could try to channel it through Cadillacs and Buicks
....
Then that's when you hit the roof because you can't sit through it

Damn, interested to hear the full song :worship:
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby EminemInsider » Nov 19th, '14, 12:14

Inverse:

If I could capture time inside a capsule

....

If I could capture time inside a capsule
Then I'd try to channel it through Cadillacs and Buicks
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