do multis have to match in syllable count

[ronnie56]

I think ronnie is a troll. And Hadez was just wrong. My example was perfect.

Seize The Moment
Freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it
These minutes golden

how am i trolling when u can't even count smh.

[Snakebeast]

I think ronnie is a troll. And Hadez was just wrong. My example was perfect.

Seize The Moment
Freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it
These minutes golden

how am i trolling when u can't even count smh.

Seize The Mo Ment 4
Freeze it and own it 5
Squeeze it and hold it 5
These min utes gol den 5

[classthe_king]

And no, assonance is the repetition of sounds. Like "hungry Harry hates happy Howie"

That's alliteration. Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds.

Awhh fuck me you're right I got them confused.


Also I've believed for awhile that ronnie is a very subtle and elaborate troll but have been waiting for more evidence to say anything.

Also slik,

it when I'm gone (although I don't believe this rhymes outside of gone)
spir it live on
hear in our songs

All those line up but crash was right about the seize the moment one

[ronnie56]

This guy just stole my avatar...the fuck

I thought that was me posting for a good second.

sorry homie i like that avatar.

[Slim Fiasco]

Something from Elzhi about rhyming. Figured it suits the thread - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDz_eTkWuUE

[Hadez]

I think ronnie is a troll. And Hadez was just wrong. My example was perfect.

Seize The Moment
Freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it
These minutes golden

Syllables not aligning isn't the end of the world, lol.

Some of Eminem's best lyrics have a misaligned mutli:

That's why we, seize the moment try to freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it, cause we consider these minutes golden
And maybe they'll admit it when we're gone, just let our spirits live on
Through our lyrics that you hear in our songs and we can

How am I wrong for preferring them to match? That makes zero sense. And the example you gave isn't quite "mismatched" syllables.

Seize goes with freeze and moment goes with own it. However, "Seize the moment" doesn't go with "Freeze it and own it." "Seize the moment" wasn't intended to go with it. Notice how the rest of the rhymes carries out with rhymes matching "Freeze it and own it" but not "Seize the moment"? That means "seize" and "moment" are independent rhymes. There's really no other way to look at it than this.

Here it is color coded for your viewing pleasure:

That's why we seize the moment try to freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it, 'cause we consider these minutes golden

That's how it breaks down. The colors match themselves independently from the underlines, which match themselves. Therefore the phrase "seize the moment" does not match the phrase "freeze it and own it."

[SliK]

Hadez I think that's what Crash is arguing...

[Hadez]

Hadez I think that's what Crash is arguing...

If it is, then I don't know why he said I was wrong because that's what I was trying to say with my example

[SliK]

Actually, I read your whole post and I think Crash would argue that seize the moment was intended to "go with" the rest of the multis and I'd agree with him. They're just misaligned.

[CrashBand]

Jesus.

Okay, first off, ronnie is a troll, nice intuition class....and Hadez, what are you on m8?

I first said you were wrong because you quoted ronnie who was saying they were each 4 syllables and agreeing that "they match up well" and said my example was bad, lol.

Your second post just now, is implying that you were saying all along they don't match, but also, 'seize' and 'moment' are just individual internals (which you are also wrong about).

I'm not really sure why there's a problem.

Seize the moment
Freeze it and own it
Squeeze it an hold it
These minutes golden

.....are all multis, but "seize the moment" is misaligned.

[ronnie56]

Hadez I think that's what Crash is arguing...

If it is, then I don't know why he said I was wrong because that's what I was trying to say with my example

this i did not want to agrue with this dude who has been on here longer so i did not say anything but now that u basically agree with me i don't have to argue with that troll crashband

[ronnie56]

I think ronnie is a troll. And Hadez was just wrong. My example was perfect.

Seize The Moment
Freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it
These minutes golden

Syllables not aligning isn't the end of the world, lol.

Some of Eminem's best lyrics have a misaligned mutli:

That's why we, seize the moment try to freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it, cause we consider these minutes golden
And maybe they'll admit it when we're gone, just let our spirits live on
Through our lyrics that you hear in our songs and we can

How am I wrong for preferring them to match? That makes zero sense. And the example you gave isn't quite "mismatched" syllables.

Seize goes with freeze and moment goes with own it. However, "Seize the moment" doesn't go with "Freeze it and own it." "Seize the moment" wasn't intended to go with it. Notice how the rest of the rhymes carries out with rhymes matching "Freeze it and own it" but not "Seize the moment"? That means "seize" and "moment" are independent rhymes. There's really no other way to look at it than this.

Here it is color coded for your viewing pleasure:

That's why we seize the moment try to freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it, 'cause we consider these minutes golden

That's how it breaks down. The colors match themselves independently from the underlines, which match themselves. Therefore the phrase "seize the moment" does not match the phrase "freeze it and own it."

Seize The Moment
Freeze it and own it
Squeeze it and hold it
These minutes golden

exactly



so actually it reads like this

Seize The Moment 4 syllables
freeze it an own it 5 syllables

[ronnie56]

should i bold the filler syllables that are in sequence with the rhyme scheme and not the syllables that is keeping it from matching in syllable count.

yall help would be appreciated.