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Postby Sam. » Oct 4th, '11, 16:14

Lately i have been trying my hand at Punches ,at 1st everything that I wrote seemed dope but after few reads it seemed lame.

I tried incorporating Punches in my last piece that i dropped in the C.W section.(IDK whether y'll will consider it as a punch but w/e)

"wife of a mute soldier buried as an unsung hero"

"her eyes sunk in surfacing a pale expression "

So i would like to know some decent Punchline Rappers / Albums out there that I can try out.

I listen to RA & also Copywrite - The Life & Times of Peter Nelson(The only album that I have from him).
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Re: Punchlines

Postby Spyder » Oct 4th, '11, 19:59

ya the first one is the only one that looked semi appealing

miller you got an odd taste in hip hop bro


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Re: Punchlines

Postby Trimss » Oct 4th, '11, 20:02

I like punchlines.. but I think rhyming is more important. I mean there are good songs with good rhyming with no punchlines, but barely good songs with punchlines and no rhyming..

But that's just me. :b:
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Re: Punchlines

Postby Sam. » Oct 4th, '11, 20:06

Spyder wrote:ya the first one is the only one that looked semi appealing

miller you got an odd taste in hip hop bro


copy
budden
big l
llyod banks
peep say Luda but im not too found
hitchcock
fabolous
ransom
slain
canibus has a few

Any particular Album/ s from Joe ? he has me interested cuz he is talked a lot here.
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Re: Punchlines

Postby Spyder » Oct 5th, '11, 00:11

word on weezy, hes the definition of bad punches


and Sam check out mood muzik 3 and 4

family re-union
5th gear
boy looka
hello expectations
dumb out


he has like subtle punches in almost every track, theres so many little nice lines in even his deep songs
check out anything u can buy him man.

his multies inners diction vocab subject matter beat choice delivery collabs everything is dope.
really only his flow was a problem but hes working hard on that as you can see by Loud Noises
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Re: Punchlines

Postby Sam. » Oct 5th, '11, 00:14

Spyder wrote:word on weezy, hes the definition of bad punches


and Sam check out mood muzik 3 and 4

family re-union
5th gear
boy looka
hello expectations
dumb out


he has like subtle punches in almost every track, theres so many little nice lines in even his deep songs
check out anything u can buy him man.

his multies inners diction vocab subject matter beat choice delivery collabs everything is dope.
really only his flow was a problem but hes working hard on that as you can see by Loud Noises

Chea ! will be downloading this ASAP. Thanks man. :worship:
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