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Dope Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '08, 06:04

Imagine if I had to console,
The family of those slain,
I slain on game consoles,
I aim I hold, right trigger to squeeze,
press up and Y one less nigga breathe,
B for the Bombs press pause for your moms,
Make the room silent, she don't approve of violent games,
She leaves resume activity,
Start and blew hearts with poor harsh wizardry,
On next part I insert code
To sweeten up the purses of murder work load
I tell him he work for
CIA with A
With operative, I operate this game all day
I hold a controller connected to the soldier
With weapons on his shoulder he's only seconds older than me
We playful but serious, now keep that on mind
for on line experience

I had to make a topic for this, that verse is just insane imo

plus it has a positive message



Little Weapon is the song name
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby Requiem » Aug 13th, '08, 07:07

love the way you flipped it with a game controller as the metaphor for all of that. the flow was a little off in the beginning, but after the 'insert code' part. it was insane.
overall- :y: pretty sick, keep it up :happy:
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '08, 07:08

IceKilla wrote:love the way you flipped it with a game controller as the metaphor for all of that. the flow was a little off in the beginning, but after the 'insert code' part. it was insane.
overall- :y: pretty sick, keep it up :happy:


your kidding me right?
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby Hadez » Aug 13th, '08, 07:10

Tash8 wrote:
IceKilla wrote:love the way you flipped it with a game controller as the metaphor for all of that. the flow was a little off in the beginning, but after the 'insert code' part. it was insane.
overall- :y: pretty sick, keep it up :happy:


your kidding me right?

no i would have to agree. the metaphore of the controller YOU used was great. this verse seems like it belongs on Lupe's album.... but who am i to judge.
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '08, 19:22

bump.
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby BaZZ » Aug 13th, '08, 21:26

This is one of my fav verses on the album. Has humor to it but also great lyrics :y:
"Hard hearted beast with a jaw full of meat
Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '08, 21:35

Chet wrote:whats positive about it?


where he says, keep this mind state for video games and don't go out there and kill people.

bazz, i was surprised to learn this wasn't lupe's verse, it was bishop g's
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby BaZZ » Aug 14th, '08, 08:39

Tash8 wrote:bazz, i was surprised to learn this wasn't lupe's verse, it was bishop g's


yea i know. havent heard much of him before i heard the verse.
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Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Re: Dope Verse

Postby anniee » Aug 31st, '08, 16:10

its okay. not amazing though. maybe its just me but it seems like the flow is a bit off.
still i like the song and i love that album :y:
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