some more beats by chris^^

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat 4
http://www.zshare.net/audio/27117637c637d7/

beat 4 just with one pattern...pretty repetive
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2711828aa92838/

beat 7
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2711793c951a21/


i was bored
feed apprecitated

[mart85]

beat 7: the clap and the sound you have with the clap was interesting but you would have to make the rest of the drums much louder, cause the clap is too loud and the synth you had in there was OK... at some parts tho there's some kind of different pattern, it's a good idea, but you kinda lost the rhythm of the beat there.. try to count the beat, or move your head to the beat, you'll see when those parts starts, it doesn't flow well but nice try

beat44: oh, it's pretty much the same drum sounds and the same intro it's ok, but yeah it gets repetitive

and isn't beat 42 the same beat? oh there's another pattern in there... well the new pattern itself isn't bad, but again, like in beat 7, you lost the rythm... listen to the beat, and move your head to the beat, you'll definately see what I'm talking about

but nice try on these beats, just keep practising you'll get better quickly if you wanna improve tho, try to work on just one beat at a time, and work on it until you're really satisfied with it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx mart
i guess i focus more on rappin tho ....
its just killin boredom
but much propz fo checkin

[Tash8]

beat 4 - the intro is kinda weird man, the drums flow decent, the melody was aite

beat 7 - wtf lol what's upw ith the drum pattern and the synth alone for this beat isn't enough haha

but keep at it man your better than when i started, and no joke lol

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx holmes
but liek i said...i just killin boredom with makin beats