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Unfinished Piano Beat

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Unfinished Piano Beat

Postby Xray » Mar 7th, '11, 04:32

Need some pointers on what I can add to it besides strings. Made this before I formatted my computer, so I'm gonna remake it once again. It's all good though cause I remember exactly which sounds I used. So lemme know fam. :8)

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Re: Unfinished Piano Beat

Postby _Steven_ » Mar 7th, '11, 05:19

I don't like the kick. Sounds very stale and out of place. Everything else about the beat is nice. I think some wood winds would be nice just because they are really under used. Maybe a harp or a french horn if not a flute.
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Re: Unfinished Piano Beat

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 7th, '11, 05:52

I'm digging this bro. I think if you add a separate melody on top of what you already havel, maybe a violin or trumpet, it would bring it to life a bit more. The tempo is perfect and the tone is great, looking forward to hearing a finished version!
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Re: Unfinished Piano Beat

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 7th, '11, 07:09

and guess who is gonna be killing this shit :shifty:
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Re: Unfinished Piano Beat

Postby Xray » Mar 7th, '11, 15:18

Thanks for the feedback guys, not really sure what I'm gonna add still, but adding another melody sounds like a good idea, thanks Spag.

_Steven_ wrote:I don't like the kick. Sounds very stale and out of place.

I think cause theres 2 kicks, gotta EQ one of them I guess.

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Re: Unfinished Piano Beat

Postby mceddie » Mar 9th, '11, 05:10

well you need a bass line, and the bass drum shouldnt be so loud, its very distracting. In rest, i like the idea that some one else said about the woodwinds. it would sound great.

good job on it so far though :y:
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