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[Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

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[Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 25th, '11, 00:29

Another free beat. Please Leave feedback and like my facebook page (link in signature).

http://soundcloud.com/bumshiv/emotional-beat

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pK2SXq1a ... ideo_title

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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby mdemaz » Jul 26th, '11, 09:45

Damn homie, hot beat.
Yo, I liked your Facebook page too, hopefully you blow up bro.
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby SG. » Jul 26th, '11, 14:06

This beat is less emotional, more depressing. More should have been done with the guitar sample in the beginning. Also, the bit where the music changes up after about 16 bars is a huge contrast with everything else in the song.

I like your other beats, but this one didn't do it for me.
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 27th, '11, 10:30

Painless wrote:This beat is less emotional, more depressing. More should have been done with the guitar sample in the beginning. Also, the bit where the music changes up after about 16 bars is a huge contrast with everything else in the song.

I like your other beats, but this one didn't do it for me.


word i didnt like that change part either. This was done a WHILE ago so yea lol. Im gonna see if i could find the file so i could remake it. :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Jul 27th, '11, 10:35

mdemaz wrote:Damn homie, hot beat.
Yo, I liked your Facebook page too, hopefully you blow up bro.
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Thanks a LOT bro i really appreciate it :y: my goal right now on my facebook is to get to 25 likes so i could make the url shorter lol :D
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby mdemaz » Jul 31st, '11, 10:08

That was a dumb idea for Facebook to do that really..
A lot of people look at my YouTube instead of FB..
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Scrubz » Aug 3rd, '11, 21:25

Ehh didnt get an emotional feel to it. piano sounds a bit off key. I think your biggest problem is always changing up the beat and instruments. Adding and taking away quite fast. Needs a bit more structure to it, and also try to build up the beat before the hook jumps in. This is not a bad start cuz atleast the instrument has a bit of harmony but that being said you got a lot of work to do. Need to add more layers as well.

Thats just off the top of my head as i was listening. Hope it helps. :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Emotional Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 3rd, '11, 21:30

thanks a lot bro for the feed :y: ive been working on the layering and things since i made this beat (which was a while ago) :y:
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