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[Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

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[Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 11th, '11, 05:34

This is the Final version of the Neptunes Type Beat. Enjoy :D

http://hulkshare.com/3sz89ny4pqj4

http://soundcloud.com/bumshiv/neptunes-type

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JnHxltL2qms

Please feed and i'll do the same (please give me the thread link)

Enjoy :D
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Slovinec » Aug 11th, '11, 20:39

The brass is actually really nice, i dont like the drum pattern just my oppinion. And some thing i learned also, try using a diffrent melody pattern after 4 bars or so. You should play with the sounds in sytrus, and mess with the settings to find some cool synths :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 11th, '11, 21:25

iight thanks guys :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Slovinec » Aug 11th, '11, 21:27

Im not that good myself, but ill try to help
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Man1x » Aug 11th, '11, 22:10

It's good, just not a fan of those sounds. I'm no expert on beats though so what do I know
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 11th, '11, 23:53

iight man lol i tried to do something different :D thanks for the feed :y:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Eedee » Aug 12th, '11, 02:19

I'm liking the beat a lot man! It sounds like it's missing some type of background melody or something. It just doesn't feel... full, if that's the right word to describe it. But if you tweak it a little to add a little more variety to the melody or something, it would be really great! It's great already in my opinion though! Keep it up dude! :)

Thanks for the feed on my song, by the way. Appreciate it.

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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 12th, '11, 02:42

Thanks for the feed bro :y: And yea i felt the beat wasnt full either but i didnt want to add to many things so i just added the "Gangsta Whistle" for some variation :happy:
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Slovinec » Aug 12th, '11, 20:37

I just imagine this being some sort of battle music theme, like in the classic rpg games back in the days for ps2 :) I like it better, i just wish you played some diffrent notes :p
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 12th, '11, 20:50

lmao :y: Thanks for the feed :D
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 20th, '11, 00:24

well this isn't too bad..I feel like some notes are off, but idk i could be wrong. the way beat sounds 50 sec in is sick, i like it like that.. I'd change up the melody and use panning a lil more.
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Re: [Bum Shiv]- Neptunes Type Beat-(Hip Hop)

Postby BumShiv » Aug 20th, '11, 05:49

iight bro goodlooks :y:
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