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Draft of a beat (please give me opinions)

Postby Raul » Mar 9th, '14, 23:10

Whenever I have some free time I fuck around on Fruity Loops and this is the 1st draft of a beat that I'll try to finish. This draft is only 40 seconds and I'd like some feedback (what would be missing, what the draft needs) about it, please. It's a loop and it's simple.

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Re: Draft of a beat (please give me opinions)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 9th, '14, 23:12

fresh, only advice I got is get some more sounds so you got mad shit to choose from.
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Re: Draft of a beat (please give me opinions)

Postby Solace » Mar 9th, '14, 23:19

Change every sound you're using because it really sounds like a child playing with a little music toy

Like there are much more realistic drum kits and violins and synths that will make this pattern you've got going sound incredibly better, but right now it's not very appealing to me
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Re: Draft of a beat (please give me opinions)

Postby Eedee » Mar 10th, '14, 00:20

Moved this to the studio for ya.
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Re: Draft of a beat (please give me opinions)

Postby supergoo13 » Mar 10th, '14, 07:51

I thought the starting beat was ok, just the sound of the next electronic part was hard on the ears.
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