PC (Poison Control) Productions [Two unfinished,skeletal tra

[Ethos]

Since we now have a Beat section for the producers I shall use it to my advantage. .
For those who don't know yet, when I produce, I go by the name of Poison Control. But, sometimes
you may see Syanied. So, just so you all know, It's the same person.

Now to the beats.
Basically, I'm trying out new styles verses the typical church organ one I use.
These two seem to be perfect melodies to get feed on. I was wanting to see if these two beats sound catchy even though
They are skeletal tracks at the moment. (For those who don't know, a skeletal track is basically a track with just the main melody and should be worked on more to obtain perfection)
So I shall work on them more later on. But for now I just need opinions.
(P.S. Please don't criticize on the fact that they are not finished yet. They are the main melodies which is basically the whole beat.)

Beat 25
http://www.zshare.net/audio/21855016f0913a/

Beat 21
http://www.zshare.net/audio/218553950884cb/

[Hadez]

yea very skeletal at the moment.

they're pretty good. i like the first one more, less repetitive as the second one.

propz, hope to hear the completed versions

[Tash8]

like hadez said

i liked first one more

the second seemed weirder cuz of the weird noise.... but good patterns and everything

[Ethos]

Thanks for the feed you two.
Yeah the second beat is one of those repetitive beats that i have.
I have a shit load of those that I'll use in mixtapes.

thanks again.

[mart85]

yeah, it's a little hard to judge skeleton beats, but the melodies are nice... they're repetitive, but if you use those beats yourself and don't mind that, there's no problem, the lyrics should "cover" the repetitiveness... but like I suggested other times, the drums should be a little louder

btw, I liked the first one (25) more than the other one, in case you wanna know which is more popular

keep practising

[Ethos]

Thanks Mart... For some reason though, everytime I put down a new beat, you say the drums need to be louder. Yet the volume is all the way up in the channel. So how can i make the drums louder? That could help a lot

[mart85]

well when I say the drums should be louder, I mean compared to the rest of the instruments... so if your drums are already at the maximum, you could turn the other instruments down a little, to get a better balance

[DC4952]

definetly improving. your melodies are sounding much better on both beats. On beat 25 though i suggest better drum samples. but wen there finished im sure they' ll be much better

[Ethos]

well I gotta thank you for that DC. your the one that showed me how to work the scales

and @ Mart. okay. I gotcha now. I'll start lowering the sound fonts in my beats

[DC4952]

no prob, now leave me feed