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Emotional Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jun 18th, '07, 19:14

This is an emotional beat i just made.. I really think its my best yet and it only took me a few hours :D

there's no chorus if you guys wondered about that, it's just gonna be a whole verse I'll write to :D... I'll be using this for something :D

so please feed:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2329643c5ea740/

^ high quality only, sorry.
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 18th, '07, 19:22

the beat was verrrrrry plain. there's just not enough in it. sometimes simple is good, but not here. keep working.
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jun 18th, '07, 19:25

i'm gonna add bass to it, i was thinking of adding violin but it didn't work out cuz i couldn't find any violin sounds...

and once i have my stuff written to it, i'm gonna add stuff to it and see what i need to add, a more dark sound etc...
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby mart85 » Jun 18th, '07, 19:40

yeah, bass would help a lot :y: but what you got is alright, the piano sounds good... like DQ said, a little more details would help, but it's still not bad, good job :y: the drums kinda reminded me of No Apologies :happy:

keep practising :8)
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jun 18th, '07, 19:48

they kinda are like no apologies, I do real simple drums

it was hihat, kick, snare, kick, kick/hihat, snare

I think no apologies was

kick, snare, kick, kick, snare

thanks for the feed mart
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby Hadez » Jun 18th, '07, 22:14

Tash8 wrote:they kinda are like no apologies, I do real simple drums

it was hihat, kick, snare, kick, kick/hihat, snare

I think no apologies was

kick, snare, kick, kick, snare

thanks for the feed mart

there was a couple hihats scattered in the No Apologies beat :unsure:

its ok, u got the melody to be on beat with the drums, which is nice. i didnt like how there was that one string sound that just stayed a constant note the whole time, kinda annoying after a while. but perhaps adding vocals will draw attention away from that little factor. overall pretty good, but add more to it, like the people above me said.
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby IceAxe » Jun 18th, '07, 22:19

yeah that one note string gets old after a few seconds.. and like mart said before, add some bass wopuld help...it'd add "substance" or somethin to it.

But it is one of your better beats, keep it up
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jun 18th, '07, 23:12

thanks, i'm adding bass now :D

and that string noise in the bg, i used the CTF thing, and i'm not worried about it cause the vocals will cover that :D
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jun 18th, '07, 23:46

*Updated*
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby MoBrat » Jun 19th, '07, 00:36

not bad man....i cant really give u advice on what 2 add and what 2 take away but from a artist point of view it's a good beat i could see this being used to make a sick track :worship:
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby Ethos » Jun 19th, '07, 06:31

This is some of your better stuff here :smoking:
I give ya propz for that. but it still needs some work. keep it up :y:
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Re: Emotional Beat

Postby DC4952 » Jun 24th, '07, 03:56

yea this aint bad, definetley better than your first ones. good work :y:
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