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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 20th, '07, 23:02

http://www.zshare.net/audio/23585255c0e39e/

i tried to add a bassline and sythns this time, i aint to great with them :sweating: so i was just practicing and this is the outcome


feedback please :y:
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Re: New Beat

Postby Tash8 » Jun 20th, '07, 23:08

not bad but it doesn't seem like a complete beat :sweating:
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Re: New Beat

Postby IceAxe » Jun 20th, '07, 23:11

the synth strings didnt really fit/flow with the rest of the beat imo, I thought the bassline was pretty decent, just could've been lower pitched or somethin.
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Re: New Beat

Postby Hadez » Jun 21st, '07, 05:04

bassline was pretty cool. and like ice said the synth didnt really fit.
but the drum pattern was on point, propz and good job on that :flower:
overall, practice and keep it up :y: :b:
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Re: New Beat

Postby mart85 » Jun 22nd, '07, 17:02

IceAxe wrote:the synth strings didnt really fit/flow with the rest of the beat imo, I thought the bassline was pretty decent, just could've been lower pitched or somethin.


yeah I agree

and another thing I could point out is that the clap/snare is extremly "quiet" compared to the rest of the drums, so maybe you could adjust that :sweating: other than that, it's not bad, the rhythm is good :y:
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