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As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mceddie » Oct 7th, '10, 01:02

feel free to use my newest beat!
let me hear what you do with it :)

http://usershare.net/z3msfl9lay0t
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 7th, '10, 01:09

it's good, definitely emotional feel to it and pop like instrumental, kinda for softer, hearty lyrics
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mceddie » Oct 7th, '10, 01:10

Kaotic wrote:it's good, definitely emotional feel to it and pop like instrumental, kinda for softer, hearty lyrics


yeah man, thanks for the feed :)
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 7th, '10, 02:40

link of feedback? and wrong section.
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mceddie » Oct 7th, '10, 02:55

chambers wrote:link of feedback? and wrong section.


sorry :P what do you mean by link of feedback?
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby Block » Oct 7th, '10, 03:48

The instrumental is decent but it gets very annoying very quickly with the same loop over and over. You should play with the drums and change them up a bit. Lower the volume here and there. And definitely change the hook. The vocals are good but the autotune has to go.
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mceddie » Oct 7th, '10, 03:56

k block wrote:The instrumental is decent but it gets very annoying very quickly with the same loop over and over. You should play with the drums and change them up a bit. Lower the volume here and there. And definitely change the hook. The vocals are good but the autotune has to go.



thanks for the feedback man!
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 7th, '10, 17:53

i need a link to a song or beat you have left feedback on, its a new rule.
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mceddie » Oct 7th, '10, 20:19

chambers wrote:i need a link to a song or beat you have left feedback on, its a new rule.



oh ok, ive left on quite a few. do you only need one?
heres one:
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mart85 » Oct 8th, '10, 15:39

yeah that was nice... like others said, it gets a bit repetitive tho, you could remove some instruments for a few bars here and there, just so that it's not the same loop over and over again. And I'm not a fan of the guitar sound, if it sounded a bit more realistic, it'd be great.

And I also agree about the autotune on the vocals, sounds unnecessary, the vocals by themselves seemed good enough. By the way, where do those vocals come from? Did you sample them from a song, or are they original?
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Re: As Twisted As You (w/hook) free for use!

Postby mceddie » Oct 9th, '10, 00:07

mart85 wrote:yeah that was nice... like others said, it gets a bit repetitive tho, you could remove some instruments for a few bars here and there, just so that it's not the same loop over and over again. And I'm not a fan of the guitar sound, if it sounded a bit more realistic, it'd be great.

And I also agree about the autotune on the vocals, sounds unnecessary, the vocals by themselves seemed good enough. By the way, where do those vocals come from? Did you sample them from a song, or are they original?


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