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Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 5/6~8

Postby SG. » Sep 2nd, '11, 22:39

No problem, it's less work. :D
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 5/6~8

Postby J.R. » Sep 2nd, '11, 22:39

Zabe wrote:No problem, it's less work. :D

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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby SG. » Sep 2nd, '11, 22:59

Can you put some feedback on mine, seeing as you've read it? Just looking to see what I need to improve.
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby Man1x » Sep 3rd, '11, 03:49

Whens the dead line for my verse?
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby J.R. » Sep 3rd, '11, 04:01

Zabe wrote:Can you put some feedback on mine, seeing as you've read it? Just looking to see what I need to improve.

YEah, feed this in return?

@Eminememy, Isn't one at the moment, track won't be sent out til September 5th.
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby Man1x » Sep 3rd, '11, 05:07

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Zabe wrote:Can you put some feedback on mine, seeing as you've read it? Just looking to see what I need to improve.

YEah, feed this in return?

@Eminememy, Isn't one at the moment, track won't be sent out til September 5th.


Oh, that's cool. Just to warn you this is my first time writing to a beat. I'll give it my all but I understand if you want to pull me off. But if you don't I'll give it my all :y:

@Zabe, I'm gonna feed you and, if you want and if B. Nutz allows it, I'll do a duo on the chorus cause I kinda have an idea. All up you, don't make up your minds until the tracks sent out though, cause if it doesn't fit the beat it'll look trashy.
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby Blu » Sep 3rd, '11, 05:13

Name: Blu
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How active are you? Pretty active, d00d. :smoking:
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 7/7-8 -3 days left-

Postby J.R. » Sep 3rd, '11, 16:44

Okay,you guys can dual the chorus. Info on the track coming sept 5th.

Blu, In. :y:
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 4/6~8

Postby Suicide » Sep 3rd, '11, 17:04

B.Nutz wrote:Subject:
Overcoming obstacles and getting better at rapping
16 bars min, 24 bar limit.

Don't start work til all are in, 1 more tho.


16 bars as in 32 lines? Or 16 bars as in 16 lines?

Just trying to clarify, coz this usually confuses some people. I'm guessing it was the first and not the latter?
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 4/6~8

Postby J.R. » Sep 3rd, '11, 17:05

Suicide wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:Subject:
Overcoming obstacles and getting better at rapping
16 bars min, 24 bar limit.

Don't start work til all are in, 1 more tho.


16 bars as in 32 lines? Or 16 bars as in 16 lines?

Just trying to clarify, coz this usually confuses some people. I'm guessing it was the first and not the latter?

16 lines. There's 6-8 of us, so yeah. Needs to be kept lines.
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby SG. » Sep 3rd, '11, 17:06

How long do you want the chorus? 4 lines or 8?
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby J.R. » Sep 3rd, '11, 17:07

Zabe wrote:How long do you want the chorus? 4 lines or 8?

4. :wave:
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby Matt Holck » Sep 7th, '11, 03:39

looks covered

do i need to write to this or can i go?
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Re: Hey guys, interested in a collab? 6/6~8 -3 days left-

Postby Matt Holck » Sep 7th, '11, 18:09

well I said I would

so here's a four line chorus

let me know if you need more
or if these will work

step over cracks with kept rhythm track
stop to step back to correct the list tack
gonna take a while when I make a half mile
switching up styles to finish that trial

so they fall when they stall at the great wall of China
smashing dishes making messes like bleeding vaginas
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