Text Collaboration, 3/4 (Topic: Love Crimes) 3 days

[Man1x]

Alright, this is just a simple collaboration for the fuck of it. Topic is love crimes, be feel to interpret it anyway you want, I have a hook completed but if you think you could make a better one feel free to suggest it. Also, you can start writing when ever you want, just send me your verse once done and eventually, once I determine a date, it will be posted in Creative Writing. You can do anything, the board is open to any and all style, also skill level doesn't matter in my mind, just write and we will feed you so you can improve. Just post your name and I'll add you to list and you can start writing, limit of 5, minimum of 3. You can do a minimum of 4 bars, maximum of 9 (Fuck 8).

Hook:

Why am I killin' your kids?/
Cause I love you/
Why am I silting your wrists?/
Cause I love you/
Why am spilling your blood/
Cause I love you/
Don't mistake this for love, I'm/
Committing a love crime/

Signed Up:

Sam
Zabe

[Sam.]

I'm in .

[Man1x]

Your signed up

[Sam.]

I am done with my 8 Lines/Bars verse .

[SG.]

Alright, sign me up, I wanna try writing to a specific topic.

[Man1x]

Zabe your in, and Sam if you feel your completely done you can send it to me in a PM box and you'll see it on the section probably today or tomorrow, latest will be Thursday.

[SG.]

Alright, I'll try my best.

[Sam.]

I'll pm you with my feedback link later .

[Man1x]

Alright, and Zabe no problem. Just remember structure, flow, and multis

[Sam.]

Alright, and Zabe no problem. Just remember structure, flow, and multis

PM'd you .

[SG.]

Just to clarify do you mean bars as in lines, or x2 lines?

I.e. 8 bars = 8 lines or 8 bars = 16 lines?

[Sam.]

Here he means "8 bars = 8 lines" judging form his last line .

[Man1x]

No 8 bars = 16 lines.

I don't think I ever said 8 bars = 8 lines, if I did that was a mistake. If your judging that from the hook that was because the hook is only 4 bars

[Sam.]

I should have guessed it ,lmao ,i'll work on it again .

[Sam.]

Is Zabe done yet ? 'cuz i have PM'd mine already .