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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 25th, '11, 19:07

No doubt, like... I'm starting to probably not post here in a while and just drop ever so often, y'know? I guess it's the fact that TR in general seems more empty 'cause the site has a lot of lulls as of late. Oh well though. I suppose more verses for me that I can use in the future, lol.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Mr.DGAF » Nov 25th, '11, 19:14

Haha true man. This is really as far as I'm gonna go in writing rhymes, I don't really plan on trying to have a career here, but it helps develop multiple aspects of my writing for journalism/films. So it would be nice for people to give some feed here, I don't really have anywhere else to take this stuff.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby J.R. » Nov 25th, '11, 19:47

MY last 3 pieces were completely slept on by everyone but Sam.

I still think that each piece should get 2-3 in depth feeds at the bare minimum.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Mr.DGAF » Nov 25th, '11, 19:53

B.Nutz wrote:MY last 3 pieces were completely slept on by everyone but Sam.

I still think that each piece should get 2-3 in depth feeds at the bare minimum.


I honestly try and feed each piece I see. I thought I got most of yours, but if not, my bad man.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby J.R. » Nov 25th, '11, 19:57

Mr.DGAF wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:MY last 3 pieces were completely slept on by everyone but Sam.

I still think that each piece should get 2-3 in depth feeds at the bare minimum.


I honestly try and feed each piece I see. I thought I got most of yours, but if not, my bad man.

No, don't say My Bad man. It's no one's fault. It's, Tr will be dead by end of 2012. That's the fault here..Everyone's leaving.

By the way..Creative writing isn't just rap. So you can post actual songs here too. Might try some Hailies song type shit.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 25th, '11, 20:04

B.Nutz wrote:
Mr.DGAF wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:MY last 3 pieces were completely slept on by everyone but Sam.

I still think that each piece should get 2-3 in depth feeds at the bare minimum.


I honestly try and feed each piece I see. I thought I got most of yours, but if not, my bad man.

No, don't say My Bad man. It's no one's fault. It's, Tr will be dead by end of 2012. That's the fault here..Everyone's leaving.

By the way..Creative writing isn't just rap. So you can post actual songs here too. Might try some Hailies song type shit.


Well if it keeps up like this, I predict October 2012. They're probably going to StudioLeaks or KTT.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby J.R. » Nov 25th, '11, 20:09

JamaicanPattlez wrote:
Well if it keeps up like this, I predict October 2012. They're probably going to StudioLeaks or KTT.

Fuck SL , KTT ftw.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 25th, '11, 20:10

B.Nutz wrote:
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Well if it keeps up like this, I predict October 2012. They're probably going to StudioLeaks or KTT.

Fuck SL , KTT ftw.


How IS KTT btw? Haven't really browsed it.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Sam. » Nov 25th, '11, 20:13

Stay on Topic, you guys have hidden the main points that were made in the last page with this talk.. :coffee:
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Man1x » Nov 26th, '11, 00:07

JamaicanPattlez wrote:No doubt, like... I'm starting to probably not post here in a while and just drop ever so often, y'know? I guess it's the fact that TR in general seems more empty 'cause the site has a lot of lulls as of late. Oh well though. I suppose more verses for me that I can use in the future, lol.


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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 26th, '11, 00:49

Man1x wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:No doubt, like... I'm starting to probably not post here in a while and just drop ever so often, y'know? I guess it's the fact that TR in general seems more empty 'cause the site has a lot of lulls as of late. Oh well though. I suppose more verses for me that I can use in the future, lol.


Don't leave you, your one of the people that makes this site bearable


I'm probably not leaving for a long while, but if the traffic gets worse, we may have to. I mean CW's proof of it. Same with the backstage too.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Man1x » Nov 26th, '11, 02:05

i know what you mean, and really CW section (when I joined) wasn't as good as it is now. Like, it was only me, B. Nutz, and Geno posting regularly back then. But there were other's giving good fuckin advice, we got a new generation now. I really need to start writing again, I just need the motivation. It's not that I got writer's block (I've got some fucking deep concepts, some never even touched on) I just don't know how to make myself write that first line, like I feel it needs to be fucking amazing.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Nov 26th, '11, 02:30

Just start by what's on your mind, man. The first line doesn't have to be amazing, as long as you feel what you're writing, it's cool.
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Man1x » Nov 26th, '11, 02:45

JamaicanPattlez wrote:Just start by what's on your mind, man. The first line doesn't have to be amazing, as long as you feel what you're writing, it's cool.


Thing is, I'm not REALLY feeling anything. I came up with these concepts so long ago (kinda shoved them to the side cuz I wasn't to bother myself with 'em) I just don't feel them any more, it's just eh, and I really don't have anything to write about cause life been boring as a mutherfucka
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Re: Just a suggestion

Postby Sam. » Nov 26th, '11, 19:53

Read a book, study literature and listen to newer Rappers, inspiration to write will come automatically.
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