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Drafts you will never finish

Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby J.R. » Sep 10th, '12, 14:04

Zellomugi wrote:
Eedee wrote:^ Not everyone is as good as you, Zello.


im an asshole, just the way i am :whistle: :coffee:

Eh that's alright. The track was from around five months ago. I wasn't very good then.

Besides , I don't care what lyrical spiritual here says. He has no content.

In before super hard diss or comeback.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby Zellomugi » Sep 11th, '12, 00:18

J.R. wrote:
Zellomugi wrote:
Eedee wrote:^ Not everyone is as good as you, Zello.


im an asshole, just the way i am :whistle: :coffee:

Eh that's alright. The track was from around five months ago. I wasn't very good then.

Besides , I don't care what lyrical spiritual here says. He has no content.

In before super hard diss or comeback.


stay on the internet :laughing:
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby J.R. » Sep 11th, '12, 01:14

Let me put it this way. Your good. But dissing people's drafts? Lmao,
I wrote that in like 5 minutes. Even I think that's shitty.
Like you don't have to be Ann asswipe about everything.

Just a tip. I don't mind you. I think your good and I'm confident enough to know I can write well when I apply myself, but that draft was bad. That's what this thread is far. Bad drafts so back off.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby Eedee » Sep 11th, '12, 01:17

J.R. wrote:Let me put it this way. Your good. But dissing people's drafts? Lmao,
I wrote that in like 5 minutes. Even I think that's shitty.
Like you don't have to be Ann asswipe about everything.

Just a tip. I don't mind you. I think your good and I'm confident enough to know I can write well when I apply myself, but that draft was bad. That's what this thread is far. Bad drafts so back off.
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This thread is about drafts you didn't finish, not necessarily bad ones. ;)

But I agree, this Zello faggot is an ass-hat.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby J.R. » Sep 11th, '12, 01:20

Ehh. That was from right around when I came back though, I was worse then when I started then. So yeah. Not making excuses, that's on me. Just sayin.

And i think he's alright. He just needs to learn when to chill.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby Eedee » Sep 11th, '12, 01:22

J.R. wrote:Ehh. That was from right around when I came back though, I was worse then when I started then. So yeah. Not making excuses, that's on me. Just sayin.

And i think he's alright. He just needs to learn when to chill.


For sure. I just think he's too cocky for his own good.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby Slim Fiasco » Sep 24th, '12, 17:27

The force flows through my flow
As vocals fall on the beat like leaves in the fall
I’m so appalled but with no twisted fantasies
They are all straight so no need for ecstasies


Let me know if you think I should finish this.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby CanadaPure » Oct 13th, '12, 21:09

Found this one in my writing book:

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They'll want to fix me like a dog but I aint broke/
Might use soap on a rope to choke my own throat/
Though I so hope that they know I'm not in control/
I'm controlled by remotes and wires which I cant show/


Was planning on writing something about a psychopath. Got bored writing it and just stopped.
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Re: Drafts you will never finish

Postby J.R. » Nov 3rd, '12, 03:42

I got you baby, that's all I need, you're a score,
Well maybe, or maybe I'll leave you cuz I'ma manwhore.
"I love you" I love you too, hug me boo, affection,
perfection, then onto the next. sexting to fix my erection,
ditchin so she be lecturin, I forget about the last, laugh and jerk off,
And if I get denied, it usually goes something like "err, stop"
and then i plop back onto the field and search for the next target,
to consume, perfume is always a plus, g-strings are simply a must
online girls to get off are always fun to pretend to fuck,
My world is just filled with enough hoes for me to be neck up,
shit, bitches come around be like you love me I love you,
quick better run i think they expecting a hug too,
then they'll expect a kiss, maybe some affection
i aint touchin infected lips, get off my erection,


Found this in my notebook.
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