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Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Eedee » Feb 15th, '13, 06:25

Meant to be read with Swifty's verse playing since it matches word for word.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYMnPdpm7v8

Alieus / Geno

Who gonna rape 5 gays? Swift McVay!
Lovin' bald men with big dick, let's taste,

I slide my tongue across minor toupes
Love them big heads, shove that shit my way.

A twelve inch fan, I jack to a man
Been fappin the hell out to bros because I can
Prostitute?
I want a dude
You know I'm finna suck around your whole damn man dick
Y'all stripper bitches touch my penis?
Well gimme it, a man in me gets,

Swift's dick vein to, blow on up,
On top of me 'til I'm throwin' up.
Wanna playa hate me? This so sucks
I wanna fuck him, wheres my luck?

All I wanna do, I gotta lick his nuts
You wanna stop me? Not an option bud
My dick?! Naturally lifted,
You bitches better duck when my cock is this big,

You fuck with me? I'll cum in you,
Your entourage? Yeah I'll fuck them too,

My jock, it sways
Why the hell you usin' petty useless lube?

(Y'all ain't goin' through)
I savor cock
Broads get mad 'cause I made 'em watch,

Me play with balls, suckin' 'em,
Your package will swell when I'm so rough with it,

I love this dick! So hey, you don't gotta be scared to fuck,
If you want head
I'll prepare to suck,
Even if the homie don't care to nut,

For every stroke, it's what I love,
Molest McVay?
And touch my nuts?
I'll open my legs up, we're gettin' it done.

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Lupe - Put You On Game

Spyder Just Silver

I think its known that I run this place, why do I lust their praise?
Thinkin punches a luxury, like you can keep up this pace.
They, see me starvin. Become this target
Leading marches to see me startin preaching the hardships.
But regardless, I’m breathing arsenic
Beating legions of emcees I’m deemed to spar with.

But see we off it, they show us nonsense
We keep going exploding and haven’t stopped yet.
Running circles around them wasn’t to mock vets
We’ve been aiming to making this place our oval office.
Both of these components like and oiled machine
Like a snake stay coiled ‘til we spoil their regime.

Your right, act like we toyin ‘til we freak
Scorch with the heat and their blood boils at the scene.
We, make a living from what we takin to these streets
Pages and these sheets turn to a raping of this beat.
Beast, ancient legends fading into speech
Reach the gates of heaven we clip angels of their wings.

Take over controllin parading with my team
Catch the titan Poseidon sailing in his stream.
Set these muts through the maze that I made so keen
‘til they see, its better just to stay on leash.

I find it, funny you need be reminded
I’ve constructed verses used to reverse the tides with.

I’m a tyrant… you think I’m tryin?
I don’t think to win, I just do it absent minded.
While you chasin the fame, we remainin silent
Cause flowin is deeply encoded in my spine kid.
Keep sayin our name to provoke us to violence
We got our piece of the pie no matter how you slice it.

Slaying in ways release the rage in my viens.
I hope your bullet holes become mouths to praise our game.

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ROUND THREE (FINALS)

Round three is the FINALS. Write a 32 bar verse (16 bars each roughly) spinning off the concept of the original song you picked the beat too. This means you can use the rhyme schemes in the original song to play off of as well as the concept. Be creative, but remember to play off of the original concept! May the best verse win. Deadline to get your verses into me is: Wednesday, February 20.

ROUND 3 VOTING SHEET: Remix That Bitch
[5] HOLY-SHIT-BATMAN!-IT'S-CREATIVITY!!! (The whole point of this round is to be as creative as possible. So the biggest category goes to the fucking assholes who are most creative. Kthx)
[4] Spin That Shit (How well did they spin off the concept of the original song?)
[3] Flow
[3] Chemistry (How well did they work together?)
[3] Rhyming/Multis
[2] Complexity (How complex were the thoughts/rhyme schemes?)
[1] Rhyming/Multis APPLIED (Did they use new rhymes for the same schemes on the old song? If so, who did it better?)
[1] Vocabulary (Word choice and lexicon)
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Spyder » Feb 15th, '13, 07:09

Dope, waiting on votes
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Feb 15th, '13, 07:10

Great drop you guys
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Emadyville » Feb 15th, '13, 08:04

Ok, as a judge I want to be as fair as possible in every sense. I read both but honestly right now I'm pretty tired. Not like I couldnt vote, but I wanna wait till tomo morning when I'm awake awake to actually pick shit apart and make the best vote I can. I hope both parties understand, I'll have my vote in in less than 10 hrs.
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby CanadaPure » Feb 15th, '13, 08:09

I shit my pants laughing at Geno and Menzo's. Send it to Swifty tbh.
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Spyder » Feb 15th, '13, 08:10

Bird is the word man. Good lookin
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Emadyville » Feb 15th, '13, 15:30

[5] HOLY-SHIT-BATMAN!- geno/menzo, they flipped their verse into a very comical version, mimicking the rhyme scheme almost perfectly. spyder/js you basically used the exact same concept of being a tyrant.
[4] Spin That Shit- geno/menzo, basically for what i just said. they remixed the hell out of it and turned it into this laughable piece.
[3] Flow- tie. both were real solid flows with only minor errors, which i assume are only really errors on my part because there were so few. both get the points, good work on this guys.
[3] Chemistry= geno/menzo- they played this perfectly and picked a good verse to do this with, the way they went back and forth quickly. but at times there were a few bars you were each finishing thoughts or 'parts' of the verse which made it work well too, as in you werent forcing too much quick back and forth. spyder/js you guys were good, dont get me wrong, they just picked a better verse to go back and forth with and executed it perfectly.
[3] Rhyming/Multis- spyder/js- definitely loved the rhyming in your verse. this line stood out as a great example of why i loved the rhyming: Leading marches to see me startin preaching the hardships.
[2] Complexity= spyder/js- again, for what i just said ^. you guys picked a great verse to shine on the rhyming/complexity but you got the points cause you executed it so damn well.
[1] Rhyming/Multis APPLIED- geno/menzo win this cause they were basically flawless on the rhyme schemes following the songs in exact order. spyder/js you guys used the same rhyme schemes throughout your verse but a lot where scattered and didnt follow the original verse's order.
[1] Vocabulary- spyder/js again, you guys shined here.

16-Geno/Menzo
9- Spyder/JS

Overall this was a great battle. you got brought talent to the verses, geno/menzo just executed the remix topic better.

great job guys, and good luck since we're waiting on votes still.
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Just Silver » Feb 15th, '13, 15:33

damn well it was a good try :( ill never be known lol its whatever.. good job guys
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Emadyville » Feb 15th, '13, 15:39

its not over there are more voters lol
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Just Silver » Feb 15th, '13, 15:42

Emadyville wrote:its not over there are more voters lol

first vote influences the judges throughout all the other rounds in which we actually did 2 before not 1 :whistle:
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Emadyville » Feb 15th, '13, 15:45

Just Silver wrote:
Emadyville wrote:its not over there are more voters lol

first vote influences the judges throughout all the other rounds in which we actually did 2 before not 1 :whistle:


it never influences me
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Emadyville » Feb 15th, '13, 16:36

i see what you did there haha
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Spyder » Feb 15th, '13, 17:09

Thanks for the vote fam
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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Spyder » Feb 15th, '13, 20:07

if we win my name will have looked liked this


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Re: Geno/Menzo vs. Spyder/Just Silver [FINALS-TTT]

Postby Spyder » Feb 15th, '13, 20:20

I know I was just showing the pretty colors
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