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(EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Emadyville » Mar 6th, '13, 06:19

(5) Conveying Emotion-Trimms
(3) Strength Of Concept-Trimms
(3) Rhyming / Multies-Bigray
(3) Flow-Trimms
(2) Vocab / Complex-Bigray
(1) Lasting Impact- Trimms

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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Spyder » Mar 6th, '13, 07:34

I gotta say, ray had some long ass lines for that beat
And trimss, a lot of your lines were just random, didn't rhyme with anything
Didn't rhyme in couplettes, some rhymed with half the line, some didn't have a rhyme anywhere

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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Trimss » Mar 6th, '13, 07:41

Like which lines? I know i half assdd it but normally it should rhyme.
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Blu » Mar 6th, '13, 07:43

Your end rhymes, mostly.
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Just Silver » Mar 6th, '13, 15:51

gonna be interesting
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Spyder » Mar 6th, '13, 16:40

Trimss wrote:Like which lines? I know i half assdd it but normally it should rhyme.


Father doesn't rhyme well with after
Your 'most proud' line didn't rhyme with anything

I mean basically every line man
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Mar 6th, '13, 17:13

Spyder wrote:
Trimss wrote:Like which lines? I know i half assdd it but normally it should rhyme.


Father doesn't rhyme well with after
Your 'most proud' line didn't rhyme with anything

I mean basically every line man

There is rhymes... but just no end rhymes. Except for low/flow, that was an end rhyme.
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Trimss » Mar 6th, '13, 17:38

Spyder wrote:
Trimss wrote:Like which lines? I know i half assdd it but normally it should rhyme.


Father doesn't rhyme well with after
Your 'most proud' line didn't rhyme with anything

I mean basically every line man


Really? I agree about father and after, it's a stretched rhyme after all. And I'm not saying my rhyming was better than Ray's or even that it was great, but saying every line doesn't rhyme is kinda harsh lol.

don't get me madder cuz time is supposed to heal
but it's really an ennemy who's too close and mean
I've been willing to die with no feelings inside
but I chose to breath they say make him proud
but he's now deceased I can't live with ease
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but leaving when my mother did, on some other shit

And I know it doesn't perfectly rhyme, but "him proud" goes well with "inside." Even though I agree my rhyming wasn't as good as usual, and it's probably because I tried different structures and just rhymed without proof reading or changing anything. I did it in one take, as the inspiration came so it's a little bit weird and have an awkward structure, but there are some rhymes lol
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Trimss » Mar 6th, '13, 18:51

That's true too, even though i check the pronunciation on sites such as google. Biut yeah, that too.
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby CrashBand » Mar 6th, '13, 23:56

"Father" and "after" do rhyme in a lot of accents.

It annoys me how all you yanks say after/last/grass/bastard.

I need to get on that UK ish.

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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Spyder » Mar 7th, '13, 01:01

ego needs to vote on these battles tbh
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Just Silver » Mar 7th, '13, 01:09

i agree these battles need to be voted on i dont see why its so difficult
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby CrashBand » Mar 7th, '13, 09:37

I'm happy to be one.
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Trimss » Mar 7th, '13, 18:39

Yeah, it would be nice if you were the tie breaker because it could stay like that for days if no one does it.
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Re: (EVT R2) Bigray vs. Trimss

Postby Trimss » Mar 7th, '13, 19:11

Thanks bro, good luck too!
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