tips on delivery

[dkhp77]

hey, i know this is not on english,tough i'm actually thinking about dropping some shit on that language.

but for right now i've made a verse on danish, and all my friends dosen't really know what to say about my delivery, they just say: man, it's dope aight.
so i thought, maybe someone on here could share your oppinon on what it sounds like?

EDIT: i know the beat is to loud and i have to mix it better, but i'm getting better on that, when i know my voice is good.

here is the link to the song btw : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_chh9beugV0

[B.A.D.]

lol, you have to use the main Audio Stage section and drop a feedback link you gave to someone else