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The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released + NEW NEWS POSTED)

Re: The Mythos EP

Postby Jaba » Oct 7th, '14, 01:45

Hey guys. I am uploading a snippet for a new track on the EP called Back to the Rhyme. I have not recorded the 2nd or 3rd verses yet, just the 1st. It also has not been mixed or anything yet. Anyways, check it out, and if you can lemme know what you think and what I should improve on or if the verse is good to go. Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/jaba2/back-to-th ... -mixed-etc
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Snakebeast » Oct 7th, '14, 03:02

Listened to snippet. Was pleasantly surprised. This is leagues above all of your other work, which I usually had issues listening to all the way through. Voice has improved, delivery is much clearer, flow is consistent. Work on your voice a bit, but besides that, I'm impressed.
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Jaba » Oct 7th, '14, 03:16

Snakebeast wrote:Listened to snippet. Was pleasantly surprised. This is leagues above all of your other work, which I usually had issues listening to all the way through. Voice has improved, delivery is much clearer, flow is consistent. Work on your voice a bit, but besides that, I'm impressed.

Thx m8. The thing about Voices was that it's a good beat, it's just hard to flow to when you're just a casual rapper. The beat (which is just some random one I found off of Youtube lol) is a normal hip-hop one, which it seems I just naturally flow better to.

EDIT - Also, that first verse (the snippet) is written by myself. So, maybe I am improving on my writing as well?
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Jaba » Oct 7th, '14, 22:30

TRACKLIST UPDATED
1. Mythos (intro)
2. Blown The Fuck Out
3. Assassin (ft. Mat Demaz)
4. Voices
5. Self-Destructive (Since The Beginning)
6. Can't Stand to Reflect
7. Madness In Harmony
8. Synthetic (Mechanical Man)
9. Back to the Rhyme
10. Ghost Town (ft. Eedee)
11. Comatose
12. When It Begins...
13. One Day (skit)

Drugged Up cut because the beat wasn't very open to fresh and new opportunities within the EP. Jaba all about that diversity yo.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 8th, '14, 01:25

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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Jaba » Oct 8th, '14, 02:32

mdemaz wrote:DAM

Aren't you supposed to be working on The Dying of Crying EP right now?
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Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby TranSlucEnt » Oct 8th, '14, 03:25

Isn't this technically an album.. ?

Usually Eps are 3-8 tracks and under 30Min total
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Jaba » Oct 8th, '14, 03:43

TranSlucEnt wrote:Isn't this technically an album.. ?

Usually Eps are 3-8 tracks and under 30Min total

Well, this is only 11 songs (2 skits), so I have no fucking idea. I don't really care, I'm just not labeling it as an LP because it's 11 of the 25 tracks I have on The Mythos LP.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby 6PRDMD9 » Oct 8th, '14, 03:46

Why not rename it "Mythos: The Prelude" or something? If these songs will appear in the future on an LP then this could be taken as like a prelude mixtape or something.

Just a dumb suggestion, I really don't give a fuck about this being an EP or an LP or whatever. It's your music and you do what you do. It's just what I would have personally done.
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 8th, '14, 03:56

honestly who cares what it's called? It's an online release from a relatively small artist. I don't think it matters much man.

anyways, the last snippet sounds better than most of the older stuff. You absolutely need a new mic though, the bad quality is something you're not gonna overcome without a new mic. You're still slurring a bit and you rush some lines and hold some words an awkwardly long amount of time to make up for it. Your writing on it is a lot better though. It's an improvement dude, just keep working at it. Maybe try to slow your delivery down a bit to work on enunciation
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 8th, '14, 07:42

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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Eedee » Oct 8th, '14, 23:07

mdemaz wrote:I like muffins.


It's true, I can vouch
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby Jaba » Oct 9th, '14, 01:17

Basedshady wrote:Okay, that snippet sounds a lot better on the delivery front than most of your work. That being said the ad-libs tend to sound a little awkward.

Yeah, I find it a lot easier to rap over regular hip-hop beats, cause I can just flow to them rather than trying to overpower the intensity of the beat (Voices' beat is extremely hard to rap to, I'm sure anybody who tries would agree). Most of The Mythos EP is gonna be way more normal and smooth, I can tell you that from listening to all the beats.

Also, Python's supposed to do the ad-libs on BTTR. I have no idea how good his delivery is, but my ad-libs are just placeholders.
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Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby DetroitSkills » Oct 11th, '14, 23:20

Mr.DGAF wrote:honestly who cares what it's called? It's an online release from a non-relevant artist. I don't think it matters at all.

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Re: The Mythos EP - (Snippet Released)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 12th, '14, 02:34

Basedshady wrote:Get Young Jeezy for adlibs

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