Vettori wrote:Great album artwork, took me a second to soak it in...
can you maybe put a few songs by themselves..i won't have time to go through them all seeing how i Am busy as fuck...But i do want to check this out..my computers Not doing great for storage atm.. so downloading the whole thing will be a problem for now.. maybe take 3 of your favourites and link me to them would be dope.
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Kez wrote:Liking the cover.
The beat is nice and funky.
Your voice aint totally natural yet, but it's getting there.
Lyrics fit the song well, easy-listening kind of shit
The flow was pretty decent for the most part, some parts definately better than others.
You coulda added a little hook I think, it kinda just sounds like you ran outta stuff to say lol.
But oh well, not bad for an intro I spose
Not really a fan of the beat
Delivery starts off sounding real quiet but gets more clear shortly
The laughing bit didn't really sound natural
The hook kinda reminds me of like, Steve and Chambers, not really sung properly lol
Flow is pretty solid, slips off a couple times though.
Lyrics are similiar to the intro but it's pretty close to the start of it so it suits, plus since it's a debut EP it's bound to be.
Your voice and content really reminds me of Tash, haha
A Day In the Life:
Yeah i like this beat a lot
The lyrics are alright but I don't really get the insight into what you're actually rapping about. Yeah it fits the concept but it's not really very specific. If you get me.
Flow you seem to have down mostly, although not totally. Like sometimes you rush a word or shit to make it fit. Nothing big, just somethin I noticed.
Yeah you shouldn't sing hooks lol
Decent track, I was expecting to enjoy it more though as it seemed to be the first "deep" track
Difficult To Say:
Hmm, so now it's been like two deep tracks in a row. Interesting track order.
Sound effects are well implemented
Hook works well, liked the grays line
That singing at the end sounded too whispered though
Lyrics were slightly more insightful than the last track, I at least caught a specific topic this time amongst the mentions of weed haha
I like the kinda minimalist feel to the beat.
Your flow is pretty dope on this. Second verse sounds way more kind of chilled compared to the first though, which sounded more polished. Still sounds good to listen to though.
Coulda ended the last verse a bit better though but still.
I like how you did the hook too.
This is surprisingly good, you clearly work better on these kinda tracks than deep stuff.
Your delivery shines well on this beat too.
Didn't seem to be any particular concept behind this track in general lol but I still enjoyed it
Stay Wit It:
Beat i'm not really a fan of
You clearly write better in this mindframe than deeper stuff. I still enjoyed listening to it to be fair even though these kinda tracks normally bore me. Could have been much more irritating to me.
Liked the hook.
Haha the grapes into raisins line was nice.
Beat is alright.
The hook just sounds too bored to me lol
Your flow and lyrics are good, again I just don't really get any particular concept here lol. I mean I get it, it's just pretty vague lol. But whatever.
This track just kinda bored me though i'm afraid
The Take Over:
Beat is meh
This guy sounds way too bored lol and his flow was everywhere
He sags his pants cause it makes people mad? Oh shit!!!
Pretty average verse from him. Oscar line was okay though lol.
Oh wow, you actually made the pants sag line into the hook. Oh dear.
Your verse ranged from seeming equally average to sounding alright
Not really a fan of this one
Third guy at least sounds energetic, he seems to get closest to actually hitting a concept lol
I liked a couple of his lines, like the thong line and shit.
But he raps more about the modern music, you guys just seemed to rap about yourselves some more lol. I dunno. Probably looking too deep.
Rapping about fame money and pussy seems a bit egotistic lol and let's be honest it probably aint the case.
Flow didn't start off well, but it gets better.
Your delivery could do with sounding more fierce on a track like this especially though, with the guitar and the angry theme.
Hook sounds too quiet too, doesn't sound really any different to your verses both in quality and in your voice itself.
Lyrics are alright, you do use a lot of similie kinda shit but i find it alright to listen to with you for some reason. Doesn't quite bother me so much.
Wasn't really a huge fan of this track though
I like how you managed to mostly keep to the concept here, but the beat really doesn't sound like the song at all lol. It just sounds like any other track so far. I don't feel any western feel to it.
Still though very good to see you clearly stick to a concept for a full song this time.
Lyrics are pretty good. Flow I can't really complain about.
Sticky To The Touch:
Not a real fan of the beat
I hope this aint just another weed song lol
And it is lol shit
It's funny but your delivery sounds more enthusiastic when you're rapping about weed than pretty much any of the other songs you've done on this thing.
Hook is alright, nothin really special
Hope you don't mind but I skipped this after the first hook, I didn't really see much point in listening to the whole thing; don't need to hear another whole song about weed lmao
Talk Is Cheap:
Pretty decent beat
You sound good on this track
Delivery is decent, lyrics I liked, you executed the choke line well and shit.
Flow is nice as it mostly has been, although it falls off a couple times still.
Hook is again nothing really special lol.
You probably should have called out by name who you appear to be dissing though, else it kinda makes you look like a hypocrite haha
Well this beat sounds like shit
You sound like you're in a cave lmao
That second guy's flow is really sloppy. You can definately tell the difference.
More lyrics about weed and shit, not bad but i'm kinda getting bored lol.
Hook is pretty meh
And there doesn't really seem to be any kind of real thought here either lol
A pretty meh track
Lol that aint how you say superb but i'll let it slide
Liked the legs shut line!
The hook was just fuckin bad lol. Sounds like a rehearsal take or something.
I like the concept, finally a kind of "deep" track done better, you had some pretty nice lines in this
Flow is nice but the second part of the hook started a bit awkwardly.
Don't Make Me Laugh:
Your flow is nice on this, and the lyrics I really can't complain about.
Concept works well for a kind of later track on this EP, especially considering what's come before it.
Fucking nice hook haha.
You ride this beat well.
This was a pretty sick track, I enjoyed it.
I don't really think this was neccessary lol. Should really let the songs talk for you.
Plus I mean it's like 50 seconds long, really no point to it lol. This seemed a bit pointless to me.
So yeah overall this was alright. A fair few songs just consisted of you rapping about yourself and weed but I still enjoyed most of it despite that. Some of the songs where you tried to go deep it just didn't really work for me and you kind of veered off course, but a couple of em you did okay on. You outshined most of your features though, with Ax and the third guy on The Take Over being the exceptions. Your flow is definately on the way, there were some minor slip-ups but mostly you had a pretty nice flow which made the tracks enjoyable. I think that definately helped. Your delivery really does remind me of Tash, and I don't know if it's just a case of you have a naturally more quiet voice or if you just aren't projecting enough. Some of the tracks it worked perfectly cause your voice kinda has the cocky laid-back feel to it, and some of them it would have been better if it had been more powerful; when you try and do emotional kinda shit if you just sound chilled out it'll hinder it lol. Your lyrics are pretty solid too, a lot of kind of similies and shit that sort of remind me of the Wayne style, difference being they didn't piss me off lol. Your hooks were mostly average though to be honest, and you really shouldn't try and sing lol because (at least at this point) it sounds just bad. Not being harsh, it just does. Hooks tend to need to stand out and be powerful, and really your voice on the hooks didn't sound enough so for them to work. Some of them worked, like the more spoken ones, but the singing ones definately did not lol.
Anyway I'm interested to see what you do next, cause since this was a debut EP I suppose it's bound to be this kind of stuff, but conceptually it was pretty basic. When you strip it down, it's basically a bunch of songs which are about you and how good you are, with a few deep ones thrown in for good measure. Lonestar was a nice exception though. For a debut though this could have been much shittier, so you did a pretty decent job. Hope ya don't think I'm being overly critical, I just don't like to leave a "yeah this was dope" when I listen to someone's tape lol. It feels like the lazy option. Overall this was definately enjoyable despite any flaws I noticed. Don't Make Me Laugh was probably my favourite track of them all, just for all-around everything.
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