Well I finally got the chance to listen to this, and I must say I was very impressed. Overall, the vast majority of your sounds were solid in terms of flow, delivery, and your rhymes were fitting and well used, but your lyrics were pretty much dope as hell all the way through. It took some time getting used to the accent obviously, but after a few songs everything started sounding clearer, and by the end I became much more comfortable with it and thoroughly enjoyed this shit. The theme overall was pretty angry/dark, which is fine cause you made some dope tracks, I tried to feed the best I could, but be proud of this man I fuckin loved it. Here's my song feed:
Sunshine Blvd.- I liked your flow on this, the combination of your accent and where the overs are made some words hard to understand, love this hook btw real chill, your energy was pretty good but delivery coulda been a little better, but this was a cool intro track.
Spitfire- Like the flow, slips slightly at one part. Second verse, cool lyrics, love this flow simple yet effective, picked up second half and was even better, cool rhymes, delivery lacked slightly. Third verse, delivery is stronger here, makes your lyrics stick out more, that AK’s line was dope, great ending too. Loved the beat and hook, you worked this well, great job.
Big Hard Man- Love the first verse, good energy, love the lyrics. Hooks pretty cool, real laid back and offsets the verse well. Second verse, damn went hard on this too, flows good again and delivery, voice change worked well, good shit. Haha switched the hook, dope man, I liked that. Third verse, again lyrics are dope, you really kept this concept on point, props for that, great flow to end the verse on the beat drop as well. Great song man.
Real Good Shit- Cool flow, lyrics are pretty cool too, flow slips a little at one part, I’m not sure if that was a hook or not but the flow for about 20 second there fell pretty hard. You pick it up though, idk whats up with the mixing further into this verse tho it sounds weird. Overall this started strong and then fell off, you picked it up but as a whole I didn’t really like this. Interesting sample or whatever at the end tho haha.
Same Routine- This hooks not bad, needs more energy tho. Your verse, rhyming structure is good, delivery starts good then falls a little, then picks up, flow stays on point tho for the most part, not sure this really fits this type of beat tho. Overall not bad, it was decent, liked the lyrics more than anything.
Life in Reverse- Love the beginning, the you made me hate you line was dope, flow is pretty good, riding the beat well, “but on the mic I’ll prove it” is dope. Hook is good, fast but I like that a lot, sounds good man. Second verse, flow is cool on this, not as tight as the first verse, but its def not bad, cool lyrics again. Third verse, flow is cool with your rhyming structure, switching it up makes this dope, flow isn’t as strong but it’s def not bad. Overall I enjoyed this a lot.
Save Me- I like this sample. Lyrics are dope on this, very fitting, flow is a little eh, but not bad, delivery is pretty good, could be a little more angry tho with your lyrics I think tho, love the ending of your verse. Second verse, dope beginning, flows better, pretty much on point, lyrics again are dope and fitting, again dope ending. Third verse, I like the slower flow in the beginning, good switch, the lyrics about what god is to you is very well written, damn you ended so strong, that was sick man. Overall, fuckin dope. Btw if you still have this beat could you send me it?
Stop Breathing- wow interesting lyrics to begin this, flows alright could be a little better, delivery is dope tho. Hook is pretty cool, interesting and I like it’s structure, sounds good. Second verse, wow war and peace line is dope, lyrics are real cool on this, flow is alright again could be a little tighter, but the end is on point. Third verse, love how you do the ‘explaining” at the end, dope idea, flow picks up halfway thro, delivery is there again, ending is dope man. Good song, cool concept executed very well.
That Don’t Seem so Wrong- Flow is dope, love how you work this beat, rhyming structure is cool too, really accenting what your saying with this flow, lyrics are dope, ending is strong too. This was dope, wish it was more than one verse tho!
Believing in You- Flow is dope, again accenting your lyrics with this flow, lyrics are dope man, delivery is dope too very fitting. Hook is cool, you sound real cool on this, flow is dope. Second verse, flow is on point again, when you speed it up it slips a little and some words get mushed slightly, rhymes at the end of the verse and lyrics/flow are dope to finish. Third verse, flow is dope on this, lyrics are dope, love the ending again, delivery is good. Great track man, brought together with a dope hook!
Hip Hop- Love the beat, flow is dope, loving these lyrics and you picking up the speed on your flow, rhymes are dope, delivery is fitting, great ending again on this verse. Second verse, lyrics are very relatable to myself, flow is cool, not as strong in the beginning but picks up and gets real on point, loving the lyrics. Third verse, again relatable, very deep, flow is nice, second half and on is dope as hell. At first I didn’t like the beat just playing, but by the end it def seemed to work well, so good job on that. Overall I loved this.
Cold Hands- cool intro, love your delivery, lyrics are deep and this flow is nice as hell, real clear on this too makes this sound even better, not sure if that was a hook, either way the lyrics are very consistent and solid, delivery and flow staying on point. Sample fits, love this little outro part you do, this concept and lyrics were dope, clarity made this even better. Great fuckin job Kez!
I don’t care- Delivery really stands out, flow is somewhat reminiscent of an earlier song, but its still on point, lyrics are pretty good tho, ending kind of fell off but those lyrics were nice. Hook is kind of annoying, but it doesn’t sound bad, like the switch from the verses. Second verse, flow isn’t as good on this, but it picks up and you ride the beat better as it goes, delivery is there, lyrics are good again, ending was solid. Third verse, starts sick, delivery and flow is sick, love this beat for this song, flow falls slightly and delivery near the end. Overall this was pretty dope, decent hook, good lyrics, just the slip ups on the flow in the second and third verses brought this down some.
Not Goodbye- Isn’t on the download?
Torn Apart- Singing is pretty good, sounds decent man good job on this. Verse starts strong, delivery is dope man, lyrics and flow is dope, really liking these lyrics, flow is really on point man, really fitting this beat, sample is cool, especially since you sang it in the beginning makes this sound better that you did that. Second verse, love the beginning lyrics, flows sick and delivery still, way to keep it up on this, the “look at what you made me do” and the lines right after where dope, switch my dna with you ending is sick, Third verse, get back inside your test tubes haha dope man, rhyming on this stands out, flow and delivery kept up man great job, ending again was sick. Great song man, this was solid as hell.
Was it all Worth It- Flow is a little iffy when you say “2008” but the rest is solid, verse was pretty good, delivery was good, lyrics were alright. Love this hook, sounds very clear, ax sounds nice singing on this too. Second verse, flow isn’t as solid on this verse, but it’s not bad, the lyrics are real personal yet relatable to me, ending was dope too. Overall this was a pretty good track, not one of your best flow wise but the concept and lyrics were real good.
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