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Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby Spyder » Jan 13th, '13, 23:13

Tadpole25 Wrote:
I'll turn your big ray to a small particle beam
Crush your chance of victory into small shards as you scream
as you lose in pain, your hopes are as tiny as grains of cocaine
while you whinin and bitchin, i got my crew for the demolition
these guns aint just for demonstrating, they for slayin
you're the only raymond that everyone is not lovin but hatin

I go hard but won't budge an inch like the size your prick the spike of a porcupine Everyone knows my dick's the size of a welfare line
in Paterson your so mad that it's so far in your sisters ass that it's
breaking her spine / has her acting so bad that shits making her racing her mind So embrace as I / apply / a fusillade of bullets /The clip is full / for every time / your shit is bull / so that means I / have a whole magazine / to make your face / get weathered / your so ugly / four bullets will make your face look better / and yet / while your best / career will be in the field of trucking
it's your lady sibling that's got a rear for fucking

I'll fuck your sister, yeah because I'm done with mothers
After flying monkey's mommy's cunt, I don't need another
But respect to him, at least he got a battle to his name
You boast in thousands of posts, but yall prattle in shame

it's almost midnight at a party drunk and slumpin your bitch asking me
she wants a little somethingi'm like come here pumpkin
so i take her to the bed room, lead her into the back room
and inside is a bathroom i sit on the toilet, dumpin, you're annoyed that
the whole room is thumpin cuz while i'm taking a shit, she's givin me a blumpkin



BigRay Wrote:

Hook
Better Guard ur life, Pray to God and Jesus Christ I warned you twice
Now he’s coming to get me, I stole ur wife u rolled the dice
You knew I was gonna upset you, take advice guard ur life


Okay Tadpole ur wack name gave me this battle
It’s like falling into an Arab hole, a terrorist Ass whoopin
That means sharp knives, guns and even choppin ur head off.
Ur moms was raped when she was only eight in the middle of Kuwait,
Yeah it was me and came out Tadpole like a lump of coal so just call me big poppa.
Ur my bitch, so get on ur knees, Nah you faggot cocksucker don’t come near my dick,
I was about to be-head you, fucking homosexual.
Look at you running your loud mouth in every single thread
I’m the best! I’m the best! That’s not what you girlfriend said
Yeah I am Bigray, what are you gonna call me gay?
That’s all you can say, Ill put you out like puttin out a cigarette in a Ashtray.
Holy Fuck dude, I heard you perform that Eminem song
Your voice sounds like a raspy slut, what you sucked a few cocks b4 you spit it?
Or did you hit it? Swallow it? Or all 3? Like an Oragy with 2 other men.
Now Im seeing you getting bum fucked.
Fuck around you’ll end up being in a dump truck, what a waste of a human being!
You think you fucking crazy? Just cuz you made it to be a hospital patient, You’s a Dumb Fuck!
Now you getting gun fucked, leave you running loose like a chicken
Now you getting hit By a Mack ten ton truck, better duck before ur dead and out of luck
This is a powerful movement mutha fucka I’m powered up like a solar eclipse
Don’t make me mad close ur lips or you’ll be floatin with ur body frozen on ur ribs
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby Spyder » Jan 14th, '13, 00:32

3 Punches - Tad
3 personals - BigRay
2 Multies - Tad
1 Flow - BigRay
1 Structure - BigRay

ok so this one technically is a tie. but its not as close or in the same fashion as Geno vs En
so...
Tad, nothing about this was personal, at all. you made every line about fucking his GF and what not and thats not clever at all. however Big didnt really do anything with punches so you got that cat. Ray had a small amount of personals,(like two) but Tad had 0 so he got that cat. Multies Tad got it. Ray you need to incorporate them into every bar, every line. Both of your structure was awful, but i gave it to Ray because i could tell where his lines ended. Tad you had those slashes in there and i literally had no clue how to read it. that structure also gave Ray the flow.

but i thought the punches and multies edged it out for Tad
Ray you did ok for your first battle, just use more of the basics like multies and what not to help the punches and more complex things :y:
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby tadpole25 » Jan 14th, '13, 01:12

Thanks for hosting this Spyder.

Next time I'll write my lines more clearly (and even color code them), as my multis were sometimes too complex to the point where a flow couldn't be distinguished at times.

Next battle, it'll be more decisive.
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Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby Eedee » Jan 14th, '13, 01:17

There's 2 more votes to be had on this battle.

And your multies were too complex? Please, do show me in the Reprisal thread some of your complex multis. I'm honestly curious, not trying to be a dick, because I'm looking at your verse and I don't see many. I see a few hidden ones like "ain't just/raymond" but nothing too complex...
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby Eedee » Jan 14th, '13, 01:28

Nevermind, I'm retarded, Geno.
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby Eedee » Jan 14th, '13, 01:36

I asked who won because I didn't see you put tadpole in bold (think you edited it after I started typing)... but then I saw it.
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby EmTV » Jan 14th, '13, 01:46

I wasn't really feeling it. :(

I actually expected a lot given the Spyder x DGAF and Geno x Enimee ones but... I didn't really feel this. There weren't many rhymes as the others, and the content was kind of mediocre :3.

I think 'pole won though (I love you ray).
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby tadpole25 » Jan 14th, '13, 01:49

Eedee wrote:There's 2 more votes to be had on this battle.

And your multies were too complex? Please, do show me in the Reprisal thread some of your complex multis. I'm honestly curious, not trying to be a dick, because I'm looking at your verse and I don't see many. I see a few hidden ones like "ain't just/raymond" but nothing too complex...


i'll deal with you later :)
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Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
- Tadpole
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby Eedee » Jan 14th, '13, 01:54

tadpole25 wrote:
Eedee wrote:There's 2 more votes to be had on this battle.

And your multies were too complex? Please, do show me in the Reprisal thread some of your complex multis. I'm honestly curious, not trying to be a dick, because I'm looking at your verse and I don't see many. I see a few hidden ones like "ain't just/raymond" but nothing too complex...


i'll deal with you later :)


Lol I'm being honestly curious. Care to show me in the Reprisal thread?
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Re: Tadpole25 vs BigRay (Reprisal)

Postby tadpole25 » Jan 14th, '13, 03:19

bigray wrote:Thanks guys for the feed back, Ya this was written pretty bad I wont lie, I think I kind of rushed it. There was no flow and I didn't focus too much on rhyming. That was a nice line tadpole.


yeah, this wasn't my best for me either. i wrote it in like 2 minutes. but for what it was, i enjoyed this battle.

thanks for the battle big ray, you got my respect
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Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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