New Around Here

[SlimShadyX313X]

welcome

[TheGentlePlayer]

I have some beats. Maybe we can do something

And welcome bwt

[EverythingShady]

I have some beats. Maybe we can do something

And welcome bwt

Dope man! Yah dude we should! Thanks

[EverythingShady]

welcome

thanks man

[cocaine2011]

WELCOME

[Imen-]

Hi Joel! I still can’t believe I’ve read it all but anyway. Well now let’s talk about this damned dope you shared guy. “I’m not very good at it”, you’re quite wrong there. Honestly, you seem to be really good rapping or even writting some rap! Some of these lines are almost magic, some of these rhymes sound almost perfect. I’m not saying you’re a professional or shit like that, but you really got it man. You made me laugh and more than once! Your first text “Married to Facebook” and the second one “A song for April” are very good; you’re both funny and aggressive at them. I liked reading them from the beginning till the end. However, if you’re really interested in music and rapping, I don’t think it’s serious enough. This ain’t the kind of text you should write (this is my point of view huh). Try something more meaningful, I mean, a real big rap, something which will hit us! Jut if you’re really planning to do something or what. Otherwise, this is really good, and I’ve nothing to say then. But try to progress if you like doing it, even though that’s not what you’re really looking for. According to your level, and seeing how good you’re at it, I think it would be great if you’ll continue working it out. What I’m saying is that I just want you to keep it up and real. Try to make longer lines, try to make more surprising rhymes, try to make it sound more real stopping often mocking of something (in all of your texts, you’re criticizing something or someone, that’s pretty good, but try to stop making a whole text on it, feed your text with other shits, you know what I mean?), try to find some beats, and then record that fucking shit out. I truly like what you do. Sorry if I’ve been too much subjective or what. And sorry if I haven’t seemed lenient at all, but I thought you weren’t looking for some dudes telling how good your lines are –because I hope you know it. Well now I quote some of the lines I preferred.


- “Interested in women? What a lie
Everyone knows you like it from behind” (reminds me Shake that)

- “You need to grow up, your no longer six
Vaginas aren't funny there made for my dick”

- “She eats dick and swallows cum like its lunch.”

- “Just drop your drawers, present your meat
She's fucked more guys then cats have lives
Sucked more dick then the globe trotters got tricks
So let me ask you again if you think I'm mean
Would you go to a different country fuck your cousins boyfriend then leave?”


I liked the next texts, but not as much as the others, so.


Peace Jo.
Oh and welcome sure !

[EverythingShady]

Hi Joel! I still can’t believe I’ve read it all but anyway. Well now let’s talk about this damned dope you shared guy. “I’m not very good at it”, you’re quite wrong there. Honestly, you seem to be really good rapping or even writting some rap! Some of these lines are almost magic, some of these rhymes sound almost perfect. I’m not saying you’re a professional or shit like that, but you really got it man. You made me laugh and more than once! Your first text “Married to Facebook” and the second one “A song for April” are very good; you’re both funny and aggressive at them. I liked reading them from the beginning till the end. However, if you’re really interested in music and rapping, I don’t think it’s serious enough. This ain’t the kind of text you should write (this is my point of view huh). Try something more meaningful, I mean, a real big rap, something which will hit us! Jut if you’re really planning to do something or what. Otherwise, this is really good, and I’ve nothing to say then. But try to progress if you like doing it, even though that’s not what you’re really looking for. According to your level, and seeing how good you’re at it, I think it would be great if you’ll continue working it out. What I’m saying is that I just want you to keep it up and real. Try to make longer lines, try to make more surprising rhymes, try to make it sound more real stopping often mocking of something (in all of your texts, you’re criticizing something or someone, that’s pretty good, but try to stop making a whole text on it, feed your text with other shits, you know what I mean?), try to find some beats, and then record that fucking shit out. I truly like what you do. Sorry if I’ve been too much subjective or what. And sorry if I haven’t seemed lenient at all, but I thought you weren’t looking for some dudes telling how good your lines are –because I hope you know it. Well now I quote some of the lines I preferred.


- “Interested in women? What a lie
Everyone knows you like it from behind” (reminds me Shake that)

- “You need to grow up, your no longer six
Vaginas aren't funny there made for my dick”

- “She eats dick and swallows cum like its lunch.”

- “Just drop your drawers, present your meat
She's fucked more guys then cats have lives
Sucked more dick then the globe trotters got tricks
So let me ask you again if you think I'm mean
Would you go to a different country fuck your cousins boyfriend then leave?”


I liked the next texts, but not as much as the others, so.


Peace Jo.
Oh and welcome sure !

thanks for the feedback!
i appreciate the criticism and ill work on the things you pointed out. thanks so much man

[Imen-]

more real

Hum okay then .. Actually I wasn't planning to use that shitty word. Anyway I meant realer :$.