Yah vs VBV (r2 b4)

[Spyder]

Yah-hah
Takin shots of venom listen to my speech slurrin,
Ill put Viper in a box like im Steve Irwin,
Weed burnin after I slice and empty this punk,
Razorblade ripin this "black" but I dont mean to be blunt,
Feedin this chump sealed up body parts like lunch meat,
Duct tape so when the "air lifts" ya words you can only "hum V",
Snake with no legs now you cant run away can ya?
Run up and jack your hat and kicks like stealin drum samples,
Zodiac killer? Well im a Cancer, the kinds thats eatin your lungs core,
Im the worm in the apple Eve ate before mans born,
Try to play that crap in my casino, hit 7 or you must die,
When you roll "V,I" see 6 guess just only 1 dies/dice,

Lines 3&4-to make a blunt you take a "black" cut it open empty the inside and put in weed. Just wordplay on the process
6 wordplay with airlift and humvee (army vehicle)
8drum samples have hi-hats and kicks aka hat and shoes
9 said he was zodiac killer last battle, my zodiac sign is cancer
11 &12 craps is a dice game u try to roll a 7. "When you roll "V, I" (roman numeral for 6 is VI) so I see 6 which is highest amount on a single dice or

VenomBlackViper
Yo i'll uppercut this Redman & see How High he can go
He'll be screaming in pain but you'll think it's an Indian chant when you hear Ow I Ie Oh
I'll infect your stream of conciousness with a chemtrail of tears
Next time you knock your girl up i'm giving her cigarettes & some of the best ale & beer
Then i'ma fuck that pregnant bitch while shes giving birth so i'll be fucking your daughter too
And welcome her to America with the white man beating her red father blue
This kids first sounds won't be rap it'll be her fathers screams
It's obvious i'm winning, fuck writing a verse why even bother me?
I've already beaten your higher ups & you're not a Chief
After murder i'm dumping you in the ocean, like a kid with a lisp you'll be lost at sea (C)
That ain't a tattoo on ya ribs it's a surgery mark
Now I know exactly where to cut you open & rip out your burgandy heart

1. Native Americans are often referred to as red men, Redman is a rapper & he starred in a movie called How High
2. Indians have war chants that go Ow I Ie Oh
3. Combining these 3 things
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stream_of_ ... ative_mode)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trail_of_Tears (in relation to him being Native American)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chemtrail_ ... acy_theory
4. He often gets his girl pregnant. Cigarettes & alcohol being consumed by a pregnant mother are bad for the baby
6. Americas flag is known as the Red, White & Blue
7. He played his son rap through his girls stomach so it was the first thing he heard
9. Chiefs are the highest form of power in the Native American social ladder, I beat Master Chief last round
10. Lost at sea is a common phrase People with lisps can't pronounce C correctly.
11. He has a tattoo on the side of his ribs. Surgery markings are drawn to show you where to cut the person open.

[Spyder]

nice battle, some clever lines tossed in

3 Punches - VBV
3 Personals - VBV
2 Multies - TIE
1 Flow - Yah
1 Structure - Yah
1 Complex/Vocab - VBV
1 Other - VBV (the white man beating her red father blue)

8-2 VBV

this was closer than it looks, Yah i loved the dice punch, but that was really the only thing you had as far as lyrics wise. VBV loved the american flag beating line as said above, the lips line was pretty nice too.
VBV was alot more personal with the Wife remarks and Tattoo stuff, Yah i know u busy so aint gonna say to much.

VBV nice verse

[Yah-hah]

Lmao @ explainin line 4. Its says often gets girl pregnant haha we have 1 kid. Liked a couple native lines. The whole fuckin your chick thing is boring tho ive heard it every battle. I got alot of personal shit out on this site so personals are easy to comr by. Good battle. Damn not gettin much love this battle huh

[ThomasAguanis]

(3) Punchlines- Yah- This was close, but the combination of the "Hum V" and "dies/dice" lines gave Yah the edge.
(3) Personals- VBR- Most of the verse was based on personal info.
(2) Multies- Tie- both had a fair amount of creative/well used multis, and a few that were a bit of a stretch.
(1) Flow- Yah- smoother flow.
(1) Structure- Yah- more consistent.
(1) Vocab/Complex- VBR- this was close, but the "Chemtrail of tears" was a pretty complex/creative line.
(1) Other- Excessive Nameplay- Yah- took VBR's username and went every which way with it.

8-6 Yah

This was an extremely close battle. The crowd is chanting "overtime".

You both know what you're doing and each had some extremely creative lines/concepts that I would have never have thought of using. In the end, Yah just edged it. You both killed it.

[Wreck]

Not a voter but I think Yah's verse was better, wasn't as long, short and to the point, had nice punches, and a good flow to it. Good luck to both of y'all though.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I really liked the chemtrail line, every battle/beef ive had is all native stuff it was one I havent heard before. Whose the 3td judge tho I always see spy and thomas?

[ThomasAguanis]

Yeah I really liked the chemtrail line, every battle/beef ive had is all native stuff it was one I havent heard before. Whose the 3td judge tho I always see spy and thomas?

X-Ray is the 3rd judge. He's had it easy since most of the battles have been won via DQ or first to 2 votes.

[Yah-hah]

Ya isnt this the first split decision? Is a good ass close battle, I see winner of this winning tourney

[Spyder]

ya this is the first time me and thomas havent agreed lol

which either points out bad battles or good judges.

ill pm x i dont think he checks here too often

[BigBoss]

I like Venoms a bit better

[VenomBlackViper]

Dope verse Yah, loved the cancer and dice lines. As for saying nothing new what else is there to diss you on really? Had to go with what I knew about you since for my battles I go mostly for personal shit, although I really liked the chemtrail line might even re use it in a verse sometime.

[Wreck]

Where the fuck is the 3rd voter?

[Yah-hah]

Dope verse Yah, loved the cancer and dice lines. As for saying nothing new what else is there to diss you on really? Had to go with what I knew about you since for my battles I go mostly for personal shit, although I really liked the chemtrail line might even re use it in a verse sometime.

What I meant was the fuckin my chick part that gets old in battlin ingeneral everything else I liked

[VenomBlackViper]

Very true about it being cliche, I only used it because you actually had a chick though which should be a compliment lol and even though I did use it I used it in a way thats personal towards you as opposed to some lame shit that applies to anyone.

[Spyder]

i think X died