CREAM vs Suicide (Cream Wins)

[Suicide]

16 Bars. First to 3 wins.

Standard voting:

(3) Punchlines
(3) Personals
(2) Multies
(1) Flow
(1) Structure
(1) Vocab/Complex
(1) Other

My verse is below:

Claiming homophobia, but your really a closet faggot
Didn't your mom tell you? Dick suckings a bad habit
Your so obsessed with dick you've gotta penis tattoo
and your such a big faggot you use cum as shampoo
My rhymes will slice, dice, and serve you like lettuce
Go look at his pic, pathetic, this fags got a pony fetish
Claiming your a rapper, but never been in a real battle
Only thing you really do is let guys ride you like a saddle
Names cream, but you need cash, this battles a bloodbath
Get burnt like a blunt pass, go stick a dick up your bitch ass
If you wanna see a faggot just take a look in your reflection
This battle will get you so hard we'll see a gay confession
Stay away from the rapping coz it's really not your station
The only thing your really good at is young boy stimulation
So faggot go get creamed, double-teamed or sodomized
Coz everyone on the forum realized you fucked a lotta guys

Didn't go in depth on every line. I figured most of it was so simple that you'd get it. But, if anyone gets confused just tell me and I'll explain it. But, it's really pretty straight forward.

1. He says he's homophobic. I'm claiming he's in the closet.

6. Look at his avatar.

9. His name stands for Cash Rules Everything Around Me. But, I'm saying he's broke.

12. Hard as in he'll getta boner from reading all the shit that he knows he does and he'll confess to being gay. Also hard as in he'll lose.

14. He has stimulate in his sig. It's a play on that.

[Suicide]

Nice.

But, I noticed on the first line you used the word acknowledge. That's a Masta Ace song. Don't know if that was intentional or not. (But, pretty sure it was since it was capitalized) But, you might wanna put that in your break down of lines too. (Not sure how many people know about Masta Ace)

[Enimee]

(3) Punchlines s
(3) Personals c
(2) Multies -
(1) Flow c
(1) Structure both
(1) Vocab/Complex c
(1) Other c

cream got this 6-4



this battle sucked tbh on both parts, i would break it down more but im in the middle of shit lemme know if u need deeper feed, but yeah

and suicide, dont use the same word "faggot" in your verse more then 5 times lol, thats only ok for words like this that and the, it gets repetitive, and it shows you didnt really try hard man

[Suicide]

(3) Punchlines s
(3) Personals c
(2) Multies -
(1) Flow c
(1) Structure both
(1) Vocab/Complex c
(1) Other c

cream got this 6-4



this battle sucked tbh on both parts, i would break it down more but im in the middle of shit lemme know if u need deeper feed, but yeah

and suicide, dont use the same word "faggot" in your verse more then 5 times lol, thats only ok for words like this that and the, it gets repetitive, and it shows you didnt really try hard man

Well, tbh this is my first battle. And I just threw that verse together without any personal research into Cream at all.

So it's 1-0 for cream so far.

[Drug.Ballad]

(3) Punchlines - Suicide
(3) Personals - Cream
(2) Multies - N/A
(1) Flow - Cream
(1) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex - Tie
(1) Other - N/A

4-3 to Cream

It was a good battle.
Suicide, you had some funny lines, i really liked how you started with the first two lines but i thought the whole faggot thing got a little repetitive.
Cream, yours was a good verse, but in my opinion it werent as good as others ive seen from you. You always do really well on the personals, but id like to see you improve on rhyming so you can get votes for multies.

[Suicide]

(3) Punchlines - Suicide
(3) Personals - Cream
(2) Multies - N/A
(1) Flow - Cream
(1) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex - Tie
(1) Other - N/A

4-3 to Cream

It was a good battle.
Suicide, you had some funny lines, i really liked how you started with the first two lines but i thought the whole faggot thing got a little repetitive.
Cream, yours was a good verse, but in my opinion it werent as good as others ive seen from you. You always do really well on the personals, but id like to see you improve on rhyming so you can get votes for multies.

Appreciate the vote.

2-0 for Cream.

[Suicide]

btw this battle is missing a vote lmao we should wait for this one before we make a rematch #justsaying.

True.

[Sam.]

(3) Punchlines almst a tie but sui takes this.
(3) Personals suic killed it with the young boy line that makes him a winner in this possibble tied category
(2) Multies
(1) Flow suid definitely easy as fuck
(1) Structure tie
(1) Vocab/Complex tie agian both of yyou used simple words
(1) Other lol @ suid for maintaning that faggot theme all over

CREAM vs Suicide
0-8 lol

suicide


close battle if only the categories result were different this result could have gone the other way too.

[Suicide]

2-1.

This battle will drag on for an eternity.

Thanks for voting though

[Suicide]

BUMP!

[Devil'sAdvocate]

i can see why i thought suicide won because of creams post 2 post above this one

will break this down later

and vote for one of yall nikkaz

[Suicide]

Been gone for days and this shit still ain't over.

[Objective]

Suicide: Maybe if you vote on other battles people will return the favor.. Just sayin'.

[Objective]

(3) Punchlines - C.R.E.A.M.
(3) Personals - C.R.E.A.M.
(2) Multies - Neither..
(1) Flow - Tie
(1) Structure - Suicide
(1) Vocab/Complex - Tie
(1) Other - N/A

7 - 2

I'm sorry to say this but this was a wack battle. I've read a couple of your verses C.R.E.A.M. and they've been decent but this shit was a waste of time to read. Alot of your lines consisted of nursery rhymes and mediocre at best punchlines, you had a few good jabs but that's it.

As far as it goes to Suicide.. Gayjokes isn't fun.. It's a played concept and in this day and age being gay isn't that much of an issue anymore so dissing him for being gay (wich he most probably isn't either, lol) is not dope or controversial. You lost alot of points because of this. If you had stayed original with your concepts you could have won this battle.

Peace out ^-^

[Suicide]

Finally this battle ends.

3-1 win for Cream.

As for the gay jokes, where I'm from fag = bad.

Appreciate the vote though.