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TES vs Suicide (TES Wins)

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TES vs Suicide (TES Wins)

Postby Drug.Ballad » Aug 15th, '11, 22:19

10 Lines.
Voting system:

Punchlines (3)
Personals (3)
Multi's (2)
Flow (1)
Structure (1)
Vocab/Complex (1)

TES Verse:

Call yourself Suicide cuz your crying out for help
Begging for attention from TR members so you yelp
And did I mention, this unstable kid's still at high school
sitting at his desk getting high off of drugs to look cool
He tried to kill himself by drowning but didnt suceed
Cuz pot heads soon change their mind when they sea weed
Gets the munchies and cant cook cuz jews are scared of the oven
So he becomes more depressed and suicidal, plus he gets no lovin
Ive gone finished him, he'll be killing himself over this verse
And i'll be sitting their laughing when his bodies in the hearse

Lines 3, 4, 6: viewtopic.php?f=9&t=113785&start=60


Suicide Verse:

You don't belong near a mic, go get back in the kitchen
Don't know who your dissin, quit bitchin, you'll be missin
I'll have you quittin, just listen, only rap coz your on the rag
You look like a hag, only time you get fucked is by your dad
Don't be sad coz you rap bad or that your an English whore
who gets slammed like a door, but ends up beggin for more
Your body ends up by the shore or up in a morgue, your dying
Crack you jaw till your crying, coz no one is buying your lying
I start sighing when I see you winning, coz you fuck for votes
The only way you come close to votes is by deepthroats
Last edited by Drug.Ballad on Aug 17th, '11, 22:39, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: TES vs Suicide

Postby Suicide » Aug 15th, '11, 22:36

Have my verse up in a bit.
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Re: TES vs Suicide

Postby Drug.Ballad » Aug 15th, '11, 22:39

Suicide wrote:Have my verse up in a bit.


Cool, look forward to seeing it :y:
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Re: TES vs Suicide

Postby Suicide » Aug 16th, '11, 18:38

You don't belong near a mic, go get back in the kitchen
Don't know who your dissin, quit bitchin, you'll be missin
I'll have you quittin, just listen, only rap coz your on the rag
You look like a hag, only time you get fucked is by your dad
Don't be sad coz you rap bad or that your an English whore
who gets slammed like a door, but ends up beggin for more
Your body ends up by the shore or up in a morgue, your dying
Crack you jaw till your crying, coz no one is buying your lying
I start sighing when I see you winning, coz you fuck for votes
The only way you come close to votes is by deepthroats


Goddamn it took me a long time to think of something to write. :laughing:
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Re: TES vs Suicide

Postby Drug.Ballad » Aug 16th, '11, 20:25

lol nice verse, had some funny lines in there, i will edit into the first post and put open to votes in the title :y:
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 16th, '11, 22:46

will vote for this shit tommorow.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Objective » Aug 17th, '11, 01:46

Both was about equally bad.

Punchlines - Tie
Personals - Tes (He went towards Suicide harder than Suicide did.. Suicide tried with the english whore thing but it was too generic and not interesting enough to make a decent diss. If he's from the UK, bring up some real personals dude.. Those peeps had riots n shit, right? Put some dirt on him using that)
Multis - N/A
Flow . Suicide
Vocab/Complexity - Meh..

Vote - Tes.

Both of you need to step it up. Use more time on your verses. After you've written your verse don't post it up at once. Look at it and think to yourselves; How can i make this shit better? How can i improve my punches? Read some shit from the better cats and observe what it is that makes their verses better than yours.
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Drug.Ballad » Aug 17th, '11, 11:31

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:will vote for this shit tommorow.


Appreciate it.

@Objective..
Thanks for voting, and for the feedback, i will try and step it up in the tourney. And btw im a girl.
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Alex2012 » Aug 17th, '11, 12:28

Punchlines (3) TES
Personals (3) TES
Multi's (2) Suicide
Flow (1) TES
Structure (1)Tie
Vocab/Complex (1) NA

TES

@Suicide, your verse :laughing:

you don't make a battle with all English girls just TES.
You should have forget perhaps she was a girl. :whistle:
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 17th, '11, 13:55

Punchlines (3) TES
Personals (3) TES
Multi's (2) NA
Flow (1) TES
Structure (1)Tie
Vocab/Complex (1) Tie

TES
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Suicide » Aug 17th, '11, 18:25

Alex2012 wrote:Punchlines (3) TES
Personals (3) TES
Multi's (2) Suicide
Flow (1) TES
Structure (1)Tie
Vocab/Complex (1) NA

TES

@Suicide, your verse :laughing:

you don't make a battle with all English girls just TES.
You should have forget perhaps she was a girl. :whistle:


Appreciate the vote. But, why did I get multies? :confusion:

Anyways looks like TES wins. :y:
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Drug.Ballad » Aug 17th, '11, 22:38

Thanks for the votes everyone :happy:
And Suicide, you had more inner rhymes than me. Good battle :y:
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Objective » Aug 18th, '11, 00:16

TheEminemShow wrote:@Objective..
Thanks for voting, and for the feedback, i will try and step it up in the tourney. And btw im a girl.


Welcome to the battle scene. You better pray to your lord you're not facing me cuz i don't give a shit about wich gender i battle against. Just sayin'. :8) Equal rights ftw ^-^
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Re: TES vs Suicide (Voting Open)

Postby Drug.Ballad » Aug 18th, '11, 11:48

Objective wrote:
TheEminemShow wrote:@Objective..
Thanks for voting, and for the feedback, i will try and step it up in the tourney. And btw im a girl.


Welcome to the battle scene. You better pray to your lord you're not facing me cuz i don't give a shit about wich gender i battle against. Just sayin'. :8) Equal rights ftw ^-^


lol i was just saying cuz you refered to me as 'he' a couple of times :y:
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Re: TES vs Suicide (TES Wins)

Postby Sam. » Aug 18th, '11, 12:08

Your 2nd win . :flutter:
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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