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[LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

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[LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 10th, '12, 11:15

GENO

Remember when we used to rhyme together as one?
The feed was in my favour probably 7 to 1,
I would wreck what I touched, you would mess it all up,
I'd grade you a C, and you were jealous of Nutz,
I set the pedestal up and stand on top of it now,
My dominant style has got you ponderin' how,
Our partnership's down and you're dumbfounded by bars,
I'll knock you out nameless just surrounded by stars,
"Oh hey G come on let's do a Kanye beat!"
I respond, "*name* see.. I am not J.P.,
I don't flaunt fake dreams like hopin' for a better flow,"
Look what I found, "Geno's verse was incredible!"
Yeah you said it, on that song your verse was wack as fuck,
And as a nice guy I had to go out there and back it up,
Fuckin' average scum in your picture lookin' down at me?
You should just be proud to be around with me, get out my League.


NAME:
it was never a tough task, to beat these Gemole's
got the hammer, blood spat from this lethal freeverse
motherfucker's so whack(ed), look at Gehoe scream "NO"
i be that cocky Rockstar, call me Beatle Niko
c'mon, you supposed to have that eagle Ego
but you crawling next to Menzo is just too feeble, Geno
in every battle you had, your people's hero's
8mile card is used, you see-through tweedle
you can't make tributes to 2Pac, bury yourself dud, rot
just as shootin' stopped name gon' detonate your spot
leave you living in depression, playin' Fack and Teenage Dream
he knows a wide range of artist, perhaps from seven to thirteen
i'm a pig destroyer, call my dick Sequoia
you're a bitch employed by Menzo as toilet
call it quits, i go by asterisk *your home wrecked*
now as a mod, go delete all of your posts, you bullshit
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Re: [LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Mar 11th, '12, 20:52

(30) Personals -----------Geno 25 *name* 20
(20) Punchlines ----------Geno 5 *name* 10
(20) Technique ----------Geno 15 *name* 15
(10) Flow -----------------Geno 10 *name* 10
(10) Structure ------------Geno 10 *name* 10
(10) Vocab/Complex ----Geno 5 *name* 5

Geno 70
*name* 70

Fuck, I've got this as a tie. I really don't know man, this was the closest battle of the round, which is surprising because I haven't really seen *name* drop anything this nice in a while. No offense haha. I looked over each verse multiple times, and changed a lot of points. But I really think this is a tie. Geno, it was a pretty good verse, you took the personals, which is the only thing that you really took from *name*. Flow and rhyming is always on point from you, but the punches aren't really there. Something you've got to work on man, if you step the punch game up, you'll come out very well.

*name*, you delivered a good verse too. If you could have stepped up the personals just a tad, you would have took this. The flow was nice, the rhyming was pretty dang good too. It was a solid outing from you as well, but not much complexity behind the vocab. And same with the punches, I didn't really see much that stood out.

Really good battle guys, good stuff.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: [LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

Postby Trimss » Mar 14th, '12, 22:19

(30) Personals -----------Geno [15] *name* [10]
(20) Punchlines ----------Geno [7] *name* [15]
(20) Technique ----------Geno [20] *name* [7]
(10) Flow -----------------Geno [10] *name* [8]
(10) Structure ------------Geno [13] *name* [10]
(10) Vocab/Complex ----Geno [5] *name* [5]

Geno ------- 70
*name* ---- 56

I think Cream could've done a lot better. His writing was pretty lazy, and we all know he's better than that.
I got the rockstar/niko punchline but it wasn't even that dope.. Anyway, Geno took this, his verse was better and the personals were more effective. :y:
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Re: [LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

Postby Blu » Mar 15th, '12, 09:20

Menzo wrote:but ALL BIASED ASIDE

lol
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Re: [LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

Postby Man1x » Mar 18th, '12, 02:43

(30) Personals -----------Geno [27] *name* [13]
(20) Punchlines ----------Geno [13] *name* [20]
(20) Technique ----------Geno [15] *name* [10]
(10) Flow -----------------Geno [10] *name* [10]
(10) Structure ------------Geno [10] *name* [10]
(10) Vocab/Complex ----Geno [5] *name* [5]

Geno - 80
*Name* - 68


*Name* your a great MC but I just feel you coming in weak on this one, let the flow, and multis control your verse, which resulted in Geno coming in with a harder impact. I'm sorry my brother but I feel you could have done a hell of a lot better.
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Re: [LEAGUE] GENO - NAME (open)

Postby Blu » Mar 18th, '12, 03:06

Menzo wrote:
Blu wrote:
Menzo wrote:but ALL BIASED ASIDE

lol


Shut up faggot.

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