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Atone vs Spyder(Spyder Won 6-0)

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Atone vs Spyder(Spyder Won 6-0)

Postby Atone » Apr 22nd, '12, 18:38

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This rap shit-- to me it's a blessin
for me to get agressive with bitches and undress em
teach em a lesson, i'm not one you should be second guessin
watch ya mouth, be careful who ya messin
just a suggestion, bitch, i eat emcee's and digest em
chew em up, spit em out, and next em
kick ya mother in the stomach than spread that pussy wider
bitch lookin like the micholin man was stuck inside her
i burn this faggot spyder, just give me a fuckin lighter
you aint even a threat to me you just a fool with long leg's
i'm a tarantula, bite ya head off and go on with my long days
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Re: Atone vs Spyder

Postby Spyder » Apr 22nd, '12, 19:26

You bruised boss, in our beef you lost listen when I say dude…stop
Ill throw ‘You’ in a ‘Chamber’ backwards bout the only way “U-God!!”
Ill unload a clip, leave this homeless bitch with broken ribs and drop rage
When my vocals hit I don’t lower pitch when I ‘Drop Atone’ like Octaves!
Honestly I took a look inside, but couldn’t find a dope verse in your book of rhymes
But its funny I gotta Slaughter Mr. PigFace whose only bringin a Crooked I (lol)
Your track Blind… was an autobiography, if Spyder is what this hoe is testin
Ill leave you bent over like ‘Limbo’, so I guess ‘all Dogs don’t go to Heaven!! (oh shit)
Solace made you a laughing stock, so I think its movin time, get a new hood
Ill ‘own’ you bitin my style, but Half of yous useless so ill only sue-a-side, like you should!!

Line 2 – You – Dog, 36 Chambers and U-God
Line 8 – Limbo is between life&death, saying All Dogs go to Heaven
Line 10 - suicide
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Apr 22nd, '12, 20:45

That Crooked I line hahaha. I'll drop a full report later, but I think it's fairly obvious who won. Atone dude, you barely mentioned Spyder.
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Man1x » Apr 23rd, '12, 01:49

Mr.DGAF wrote:That Crooked I line hahaha. I'll drop a full report later, but I think it's fairly obvious who won. Atone dude, you barely mentioned Spyder.

This, Spyder won.
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Spyder » Apr 23rd, '12, 03:10

alright up to Atone if he wants breakdowns but 3-0 KO?

thanks for votes guys and good lookin on my 50th win :y:
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Solace » Apr 23rd, '12, 03:46

If there are no breakdowns easily Spyder.
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Spyder » Apr 23rd, '12, 03:51

thanks holmes

idk if he wants breakdowns or not but

Sol u need to get back to battlin,

i think your once a year quota is up haha
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Solace » Apr 23rd, '12, 04:17

Lmao, nah; I just never really enjoy writing battles (and definitely have never been one for thinking of punchliness) so I stray from this area...But one day :y:
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Apr 23rd, '12, 13:37

I think Spyder took this, his was a lot more personal with a lot more punchlines. Good job to both!
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby BigBoss » Apr 23rd, '12, 14:45

Spyder.


Atones was cool, the one thing I didn't like was the "chew em up and spittem out" every person who thinks they're good says that.
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Re: Atone vs Spyder(Open)

Postby Spyder » Apr 23rd, '12, 16:25

ight sense right now this is 6-0 im assuming no breakdown needed

so props to atone
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