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Bigray vs. Eedee

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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby Eedee » Mar 28th, '13, 04:02

Reading your verse literally gave me cancer.

That was one clusterfuck of nothing... Holy fuck, I'd think after all that bickering you'd come harder.

edit: Bee tee dubz, my mentally challenged friend, I wasn't a mod when Class wrote that. Decisions that were made were not up to me, so the "Dear Mods," thing is entirely inaccurate. El Oh El.

But seriously, that verse was pure garbage. Just rambling on about sucking dick and shit. Jesus Christ, I mean make one or two jokes, but an entire verse about me being gay? That MUST reflect something about yourself. Tbh.
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby Eedee » Mar 28th, '13, 04:50

^ Oh shit, you didn't explain your vote. You don't deserve to be a judge or mod. OMG.
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby Eedee » Mar 28th, '13, 05:46

Thanks for the vote, Geno. :y:
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby SliK » Mar 28th, '13, 07:09

Eedee you are coming across as petty right now. Bigray clearly said something that upset you and instead of handling you're trying to humiliate him... By writing 48 lines of mediocre battle rap?
C'mon dude, realistically you're not that good. I know it's your dream and all, but considering how much more effort you put into your verses (I'm talking in the AS too) you should be much better. Considering you are trying to school him, you should be much better. But you're not, and reading your 48 lines and your comments that follow is just embarrassing.
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby CrashBand » Mar 28th, '13, 10:09

*shots fired*
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby Trimss » Mar 28th, '13, 13:06

Weekly and Teddy doesn't rhyme, does it ?
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby SoldierShady » Mar 28th, '13, 14:32

bigray wrote:That is not the point I am getting across, but they actually sort of rhyme with the Y's at the end.

This is true. "Copyrighted" also rhymes with "bad"
Those D's at the end. :coffee:
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby SoldierShady » Mar 28th, '13, 15:01

bigray wrote:actually it doesn't "Copyrighted" also rhymes with "bad" and it doesn't even sound the same.

Copyrighted and bed would have been better example from you.

Do you actually say "CopyrightAd" that is not even how you say the word.

Good try though :coffee:

I was being sarcastic! Damn. :facepalm2
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby SajN » Mar 28th, '13, 17:32

I am sorry, but "weekly" and "Teddy"? Ehh...
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby 12characters » Mar 28th, '13, 17:41

Ray, 'WEEK' and 'TED' do not rhyme.

If you want you're going to have end rhymes that are only monosyllabic (where only one syllable rhymes in your couplets) then you should make them clever or witty.. or in a diss, hard hitting at least. :y:
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby SajN » Mar 28th, '13, 17:43

No, bigray, the first thing I saw when I opened this page was that "rhyme" in your post at the top on this page, and I immediately thought "that doesn't rhyme tho"
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby SoldierShady » Mar 28th, '13, 17:55

bigray wrote:
Anyways this is a learning process for me and its not like I have been writing for 3 years or so.....If anyone works out at the gym they will make errors big time when they start out or even any sport, but they wont improve if people keep shitting on them....You wont gain 10 pounds of muscle in 3 months of starting the gym, it takes time.


I've never written in my life (a rap, that is..) but I know that "salty" and "Walgreens" rhyme. How hard can it really be to just rhyme?
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby 12characters » Mar 28th, '13, 18:29

What was the line? If done right (like SliK) it would count as a good personal.
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby Eedee » Mar 28th, '13, 18:53

Can we have some more votes on this so we can close it, please?
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Re: Bigray vs. Eedee

Postby Eedee » Mar 28th, '13, 19:01

You know I can't do that.
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