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Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

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Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

Postby Spyder » Apr 15th, '13, 00:14

trimss wrote:
Painkiller, a stupid faggot with weak guts
A victim, bullied and beaten by real thugs
you live in the hood, the type of dude
who just follows a group and whenever he tries to joke,
he's always killing the mood
I know you're not down to hit and scrap,
the only fight you been in was a written rap
you lost, it's a fact so don't even diss me back
It'd be easier for you to write a sick line,
repeat it like six times, you know people will whine
and you'll get put out by my sick rhymes..
So you'll be like your idol who's shit, right?
Now you're mad because K.dot shits on his lines!
And tell me what's up with that Emma Watson fan club?
It's so sad you're a damn nut, I'll embarass you like
when you got caught masturbating with your pants up
Maybe some day you'll be forced to eat out some bitches
But you won't fuck, cuz your nose bigger than your dick is
I'll fucking explode the bubble you're in,
autism, I don't care if you're struggling
Each one of my line is a killer for you, I'm iller than flu
my corny lines are still better than you!
Fuck a painkiller, get some yellow and blue pills
What a sad life, go wank off with some lube, chill!

There are references about Lupe, Emma, his life, and where he lives. If you know him you know why I'd say stuff like that.


Pain wrote:
I'm bombing you, but this isn't North Korea with a threat
I promise I'm hitting you harder than a potent hit of meth
Cuz fuck, I'm up against a choke artist with no versatility
And damn it's no joke honestly rapping is your worse ability
It hurts admittedly because this guy always renounces verbs
Uses no adjectives and can't even pronounce his words
Trimss listen, the problem isn't only your accents you lack sense
Verses so perplexed when I begin reading I'm hoping your rap ends
You are in no position to call out anyone, are you insane?
Those tight jeans you wear constrict blood flowing through your brain
Explains why you're not thinking straight, outta your mind you lost it
With nonsense, you're cockless fag that's always coming out the closet
So stop this charade of all the dumb bullshit you always say
Making threads about how you're gay and love foreplay
And how you may or may not like dicks and gay shit like this
Hell, I bet if I'd bend over it'd be my ass you might kiss
But sometimes I get get confused are you Trimss or Zolt Shady?
You stan so hard if Yela's head was shaved, you'd go bald maybe
It's funny because you really don't understand the southern slanguage
Funny because you're probably reading this with a face of utter anguish
But the fun ends because this isn't a sitcom like How I Met Your Mother
You're a privileged boy who knows nothing about growing up in the gutter
Damn Pain, I thought you and Trimss were tight like an anacondas grip
We are but this diss probably sparked a flame in Trimss, and the dramas lit
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Re: Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

Postby Trimss » Apr 15th, '13, 00:37

Loll he went in. Tbh he killed me, his personals were hard and mine felt half assed compared to his. Great job pain
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Re: Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Apr 15th, '13, 01:05

Trimss wrote:Loll he went in. Tbh he killed me, his personals were hard and mine felt half assed compared to his. Great job pain

This verse was hard to write tbh because you're one of my closest friends in the forum, but at the same time I wanted to win so I may have gone a bit to aggressive. You know I love you homie, great battle.
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Re: Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

Postby Spyder » Apr 15th, '13, 01:29

3 punches - pain
3 personals - pain
2 multies - tie
1 flow - trimss
1 vocab/complex - ehh pain
1 structure - trimss

pain got this easy for me.
just all around better, not that pain was great. didnt really hit anything too hard with personals or punches. but trimss verse could be applied to anyone. his lines were shorter so he got the flow for me. and nothing stuck out with schemes or multies so i gave that a tie.

pain gets it for me
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Re: Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

Postby Eedee » Apr 15th, '13, 01:58

3 punches - Pain
3 personals - Pain
2 multies - Pain
1 flow - Trimss
1 vocab/complex - Pain
1 structure - Tie

Pain's verse had actual punchlines and personals compared to Trimss; his felt generic and not really aimed towards Pain, except for the Emma bit, but hey, I like Emma too. I just felt you didn't play off of his love for Emma except for just mentioning it. Pain got multis for me because he had more and they were more consistent. Trimss had multis but they felt easy... ya know? I know you have an accent, I accounted for that in stuff like "killing the mood / live in the hood" type shit, but Pain's were more complex too, it felt. This cat could've been a tie, but I think Pain won it, tbh. Final score isn't as lopsided as it seemed, it's just how the cats ended up.

Good battle. :y:

Pain - 10
Trimss - 2
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Re: Trimss vs Painkiller (ransom)

Postby Spyder » Apr 15th, '13, 02:13

pain wins

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