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R2(Tourn Battle b2.r2 )Spyder vs CorrosionCover -Spyder wins

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R2(Tourn Battle b2.r2 )Spyder vs CorrosionCover -Spyder wins

Postby Sam. » Mar 17th, '11, 14:04

Read the simple rules here : viewtopic.php?f=26&t=109881


Spyder wrote:I murder pen-to-pad lyrically raping when I bend-his-back
And end this battle with him “Zero Love” like a ‘tennis-match.’
Leave his head “All a gash” like ‘split decision’ come-to-be
Flippin shit on ‘Allagash’ bout the only way I’m “Under-C!”
Run-and-flee, not a nice-opponent get on the mic-and-own-it
Basically my name at the top of this page I got a Signing Bonus,
‘Rhyme explosive’ ‘droppin bombs’ off the top, with flow-to-smother
so when I ‘expose’ ya its not ‘secret’ that I “blow-ya-Cover”!!
a flee bitten biter not writer, stay away from my work to spare-ya-own
with weak drop, thinkin your tracks are ‘deep’ but couldn’t “bare-a-tone”

line2- zero in a tennis match is called Love
line3,4- all a gash play on allagash, huge river… so under Sea/C(name)
line7,8- refer to exposing and exploding… play on blow your Cover(name)
line10- a deep voice is baritone


CorrosionCover wrote:I'm restless, a lyrical sorcerer devouring past, oncoming arthropod's last test,
Blocking your book lungs, shook ones, stood one foot on Spyder's chest,
No interest in what's your battle record, paradox like a bottle of sour liqueur,
I'll throttle you, no doubt coz' alone you're wack like "Coccoa's power return",
Time for interrogation, selfish Spidy seems to be towering with the reputation,
For me you've already lost it after performing fetish penis self-amputation,
The solution of a riddle "why you're a clit afraid of death", shit you did admit,
Read it, you want "the money, the women, the fortune and fame" indeed,
but You're punches are funny like torture, common and lame, at least you don't spit,
This ain't street, you ain't tough, even from here you can hear the audience laugh,

1. Devouring past -> devouring pest
2. Shook ones - a reference to "Shook Ones Pt. II", the halfway crooks stuff
4. Without his forum friends he's wack like Coccoa guy (and his last diss on Big Ax-D)
5. He seems to have a lot of respect
7. He stated that for him death is the most fearsome thing in the world
8/9. A play on his interests
Last edited by Sam. on Mar 20th, '11, 20:44, edited 3 times in total.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Spyder » Mar 17th, '11, 18:27

nice verse homie, but i never dissed Ax?
and alot of the sentences didnt rhyme

just some building critique bro :y:
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby CorrosionCover » Mar 17th, '11, 18:37

Thanks, good verse from you too. :y:

"wack like Coccoa guy (and his last diss on Big Ax-D)" - Coccoa guy did a wack diss, not you

Sentences rhyme a-a, b-b despite the last one which rhymes with another word in a line.

Maybe you meant that not every line has a multi ending, with this i can agree,

Good luck :y:
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Sam. » Mar 17th, '11, 18:38

:coffee:
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby BILI » Mar 17th, '11, 22:35

Nice battle guys :y:
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Spyder » Mar 18th, '11, 03:00

ya sam or someone drop a vote??
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Satire » Mar 18th, '11, 03:22

(3) Punchlines: Spyder
(3) Personals: Corrosion for 7, I guess.
(2) Multies: Spyder
(1) Flow: Spyder
(1) Structure: Spyder
(1) Vocab/Complex: Cover
(1) Other: N/A

7-4: Spyder

Short Comment: I forgot I was still a judge to this lmfao.
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Spyder » Mar 18th, '11, 04:02

thanks sat :y:
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby CorrosionCover » Mar 18th, '11, 07:27

Hehe, welcome back Satire ! :y:

You shouldn't vote yet tho, we still got the flipping part to do before the end :)
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Satire » Mar 18th, '11, 07:47

CorrosionCover wrote:Hehe, welcome back Satire ! :y:

You shouldn't vote yet tho, we still got the flipping part to do before the end :)


Oh lol. Spyder asked so I just figured.
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Sam. » Mar 18th, '11, 11:39

@ spyder and satire man there is one more round to this battle
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2.r2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby CorrosionCover » Mar 18th, '11, 19:30

I'm writing my stuff... who's that chick on your avatar Mc Sam ?
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2.r2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Sam. » Mar 18th, '11, 19:33

CorrosionCover wrote:I'm writing my stuff... who's that chick on your avatar Mc Sam ?

the one in my sig ma nig ya dig .
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2.r2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby CorrosionCover » Mar 18th, '11, 20:35

Done :y:
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Re: R2(Tourn Battle b2.r2 )Spyder v/s CorrosionCover

Postby Spyder » Mar 18th, '11, 22:45

we usually vote on rounds but ok

ill have mine in soon
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