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LW: Verb-Ill vs Scorpion (CLOSED)

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LW: Verb-Ill vs Scorpion (CLOSED)

Postby C-Game » Feb 8th, '07, 20:53

Post count 30 + AND
Registered on or before December 25th 2006
Simple votes like I vote X is not accpeted
must give a brief description on why u voted him OR/AND
vote on ALL/ SOME of these categories

FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

5 votes to win
4-1 TKO
3-0 KO



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NO DISCUSSION ABOUT VOTES OR ANYTHIN
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VOTING WILL BE CLOSED ONLY BY ME , BAR , MARTH , KEZ

SO VOTE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Scorpion

get moving yur losing, doing but not proving, yur all laid out
notice I'm corrosive, eroded yur eyes will close kid, I pave mouths

so yur verbs ill and words kill in this type sport, tha fights short
jump this hurdle I heard nil, v deserves pills he's on life support

under my breath I said, this test is cred, but v always fess like a fed
my punches r left in yur head, no death bed yur fucking text is dead

this docs script will stop yur diss, top this, I lifted u up high
yur just not equipped, u'll drop quick like assisted suicide


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Verb-Ill

This faggot's more maggot than arachnid, he's a re-dic-u-lous-queer
This scorpi-enne likes horny-men, he's always had a-prick-at-his-rear

MY lyr-ics-are-rare just like-steak and the rhymes-taste-excellent-raw
The graphic-rhymes smash arachnid-spines like-great-elephant-paws

His multies are irrelevant flaws, plus zero nameplay-or-sting-in-his-rap-tale
He's 6 feet deep in an ash jail, as my mallet takes-a-swing-at-this-last-nail

I`ll hammer 'em with mad grammar till he's stammers and the audience-sing
Thought-he-cud-bring my crown-down, but he bows-now to the Scorpion-King!!


Exp..
Arachnid is the name of species class it belongs to.
scorpions have their sting behind them.
Sting = Venom/Punches.....Tale = Tail/Verse
The Nails about to be in the coffin
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 8th, '07, 21:07

FLOW scorpion
STRUCTURE verb ill
PUNCHES verb ill
MULTIES verb ill
RHYMES verb ill
VOCAB verb ill
COMPLEXITY verb ill
NAMEPLAY verb ill
OTHER verb ill

overall 1-8...vote fo verb ill
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Postby MoBrat » Feb 9th, '07, 04:36

^^^^U mean 8-1 Verb-Ill^^^^

FLOW -- Scorpion
STRUCTURE -- Verb-Ill
PUNCHES -- Verb-Ill
MULTIES -- Verb-Ill
RHYMES -- Verb-Ill
VOCAB -- Verb-Ill
COMPLEXITY -- Verb-Ill
NAMEPLAY -- Verb-Ill
OTHER(enjoyment, creativity) -- Verb-Ill

OVERALL -- 8-1 Verb-Ill
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Postby C-Game » Feb 10th, '07, 17:17

2-0 VI
more votes pls
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Postby pawel » Feb 10th, '07, 17:56

Scorpion, better lyrics, structure, better diss :8)
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Postby Flamez » Feb 10th, '07, 18:07

FLOW - Scorpion
STRUCTURE - Scorpion
PUNCHES - Verb-Ill
MULTIES - Verb-Ill
RHYMES - Verb-Ill
VOCAB - Verb-Ill
COMPLEXITY - Verb-Ill
NAMEPLAY - Verb-Ill
OTHER - Verb-Ill (enjoyment)

final vote: Verb-Ill
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Postby C-Game » Feb 10th, '07, 18:45

pawel wrote:Scorpion, better lyrics, structure, better diss :8)


can u pls explain ur vote a lil....
ill PM u now...
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Re: LW: Verb-Ill vs Scorpion (VOTE NOW!!!)

Postby pawel » Feb 10th, '07, 18:53

FLOW Scorpion
STRUCTURE scorpion
PUNCHES scorpion
MULTIES scorpion
RHYMES scorpion
VOCAB verb-ill
COMPLEXITY verb-ill
NAMEPLAY verb-ill
OTHER Scorpion, enjoyed it more

Scorpion wins ;) lol
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Postby B.A.D. » Feb 11th, '07, 07:45

FLOW - Both
STRUCTURE -Both
PUNCHES -Verb-ill
MULTIES -both
RHYMES -Verv-ill
VOCAB - Verb-ill
COMPLEXITY -Verb-ill
NAMEPLAY -Verb-ill
CREATIVE LINES - Verb-ill
OPENING LINE - NONE
CLOSING LINE - Scorpion
DELIVERY - Verb-ill
POISON - Verb-ill
all of that is 70% Which be: SCORPION: 10 of 70/VERB-ILL: 65 og 70

10%: DISASTER LINE
Verb-ill:
"MY lyr-ics-are-rare just like-steak and the rhymes-taste-excellent-raw
The graphic-rhymes smash arachnid-spines like-great-elephant-paws"

20% HARD TAKEN N BRAKEN
Verb-ill:
"plus zero nameplay-or-sting-in-his-rap-tale"

Scorpion: 10
Verb-ill: 95

WINNER: VERB-ILL!!!!
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Postby C-Game » Feb 11th, '07, 18:16

4-1 TKO
closed...
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