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Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

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Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Low Key » Feb 4th, '10, 02:48

8 lines, no flipping, i've done my verse, you ready?

Strictt Ame, you did well to spit that fire against Chambers
but you stalked him! (lol) let's see how you perform against strangers ....
.. you're the one in danger, because i'm so low key - you don't know me
you couldn't pick up the pace on me, even if i rapped so slow-ly.
i see you've got seven wins out of seven, but i've the got wings out of heaven
so i'll fly up high and drop you, leave you like the twin towers, severed!
i'll sit back now and listen to the obvious image that you'll paint me
and watch on as you use my girlfriend's picture against me (i got you sussed)
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 4th, '10, 02:54

Leave this bastard-to-roast, fists wont quit SMASHIN YA THROAT
So when my punches “flip Key” people think Im “TRAFFICKING COKE“!!
And the rhymes you’re hyping-are-worse than me hyphening-words
You an easy target..look how many times I “hit Key” TYPING THIS VERSE!!
Im a morbid swordsman, straight horrid, merkin this HELPLESS GEEK
So when I say nobody “feels Low” it doesn’t relate to great “SELF ESTEEM”!!
Quit FRONTIN FREAK you NOTHIN SWEET, so stop BLUFFIN PLEASE
Cuz I got blades, call’em “Ace & Hardware“..they keep “CUTTIN KEYS“!!
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Low Key » Feb 4th, '10, 02:57

lol my last 2 lines were a fail. :(
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Good For Nothing » Feb 4th, '10, 03:23

my vote goes to strictt ame

but can you please stop highlighting ur multies it's better if you let the reader figure them out themselves :y:

great attempt LK i lover ur first 3 lines especially the keeping low key part :b:
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby classthe_king » Feb 4th, '10, 03:29

damn strict, that was crazy

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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 4th, '10, 03:36

slimshadystalker wrote:my vote goes to strictt ame

but can you please stop highlighting ur multies it's better if you let the reader figure them out themselves :y:

great attempt LK i lover ur first 3 lines especially the keeping low key part :b:


Thanks but no thanks..I'll write my verses how I want to..good looks on the vote though, but you need to break it down like Class for it to count
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby classthe_king » Feb 4th, '10, 03:44

Strictt Ame wrote:
slimshadystalker wrote:my vote goes to strictt ame

but can you please stop highlighting ur multies it's better if you let the reader figure them out themselves :y:

great attempt LK i lover ur first 3 lines especially the keeping low key part :b:


Thanks but no thanks..I'll write my verses how I want to..good looks on the vote though, but you need to break it down like Class for it to count


Your punches are amazing, yet simple. There so easy once you see them but when im trying to figure out punches i never can think of them :shakehead:
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '10, 04:13

My vote to strictt cuz of nameplay. :worship: :worship: :worship:

Low Key, yours was awesome, I thought I wanted to vote you at first but Strict pawns you in this. :sweating:
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 4th, '10, 07:13

Yeah Low was really impressed with ya but thats prolly the best I've seen from Ame.

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Makes it seem like he killed him but Key brought that shit
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 4th, '10, 16:17

2-0 or 3-0..Your call Low..Fish didnt really break it down so I'll leave that up to you..

On a side note: If I wouldve known that was your girlfriend, I prolly wouldve used it in a punch..lol
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Low Key » Feb 4th, '10, 16:20

i'll let it count, you win lol. :y:
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Re: Low Key vs Strictt Ame (vote)

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 4th, '10, 16:25

Ok..then 3-0..this can be closed


BTW Key, nice verse..I never comment on oppoents until votes are finished..you came with it, good battle
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