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Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

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Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Requiem » Jan 10th, '10, 21:46

i spent a while working on this and it turned out pretty sick.
*Robollama helped me with the recording and mixing process, he's got a great ear for the technical aspects of audio. Though he said he'll never do it again.
We worked from 9:30 pm, till 5:30 AM :sweating:
thx bro, forgot u were on the site :happy:

YOUTUBE

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A99ys0RUvVo
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btw, trying to figure out what the fuck kind of structure Em had on his verse was ridiculous :(


this also gives ya'll an idea of where i am lyrically ;)

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Lyrics


Chorus

I’ma find this girl, and I aint stopping till she’s fuckin’ dead.
(repeat)
She’ll lie now in the dirt mother fucker,
I’ma stake this crazed chick in the earth mother fucker.
She’s gone, mother fucker she’s gone. She’s gone.

Verse 1

She’s got fire in her veins, a gaze full of lies,
An innocent face, but she’s got demons inside.
Help her I’ve tried, to her it’s a game,
Why pay the mind, she’ll never change.
Gets worse every time, so fuck it never mind.
I’ll leave her here to die, too many years to rewind.
I have this verse to remind, these people of how I climbed,
And how I pantomimed, for this girl to respect my lines.
As the days get longer, and I get sicker,
I’m waiting for a chance to string her up and lynch her.
It’ll be as soon as the full moon rise above the,
Horizon I will fuck ya, no chance cuz I’m upon ya.

Verse 2

Before I kill her, you know what I’ll tell her.
You aint going to heaven, it’s hell for sure.
It’s like I take her life, knock her fuckin lights out,
Leave her with stains she can’t fuckin wipe out.
Ha! My word is my power,
Your defenses are weak, and this is the final hour.
No one will survive, I murder pure lives,
If the grave gets to heavy, I’ll start digging in the side.

Chorus

Verse 3

It hurts, and yes it shows.
This pain you’ll never know
If only you could see how bloody and how cold,
Her body has become,
Her back’s nailed to the wall,
If she start’s waking up, I’ll make sure end it all.

I think her lungs are cavin in, her gaze is thin
Gaspin’ like a baby in, a hospital room with paper skin.
She’s booked to die, she’s lookin coy,
It’s what this crooked mind of mine enjoys.
Just look at the tears up in her eye,
I stole her soul, hung it up to dry.
Swung with a blunt,
Object to the front, one hit just fucked up this damn slut.
Then I grabbed a hair full of this maimed cunt, fuck this dame in her make up
I guess I’m stuck, but there won’t be traces of her left with any luck.
Gotta say that i fear one day, the officers of the law gonna see it,
I swear to God, I won’t dare run,
I mean what I say, I don’t carry a gun.
don't need one. we'll have fun. just come around i'm creepin round.
She’s sleepin now, her bones are bare,
Permanently she’ll be lying there.
This grave is where she’s meant to rest, where she died,
You’ll never guess, where I’ll hide her rotting hide.
In cyanide, why am I,
So psychofide.
Just a little to hyped to die,
huh, what, aren't you entertained?
Man it's starting to rain, got you going insane,
hear them chains? Gonna complain,
i'll add to the pile of women slain.
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Just Silver » Jan 10th, '10, 22:02

says i need an unknown plugin
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Requiem » Jan 10th, '10, 22:06

Just Silver wrote:says i need an unknown plugin

:confusion:

that's weird... u can't listen to it through zshare?
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Just Silver » Jan 10th, '10, 22:15

Requiem wrote:
Just Silver wrote:says i need an unknown plugin

:confusion:

that's weird... u can't listen to it through zshare?

nope
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Requiem » Jan 10th, '10, 22:18

Coleon wrote:honest opinion

it was written well

I'm not a fan of covers

you fell off the beat often

words were stretched

your voice is better

delivery was good

I just didn't like it though, I hate covers cause they be corny

keep doin your thing though



thx man :happy:
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby robollama » Jan 10th, '10, 23:05

Psh, not gunna even mention me? :tounge2:


Liked it tho. You should put it on YouTube...

Only part that was bad was of course the Em singing part. Rest was dope
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Requiem » Jan 10th, '10, 23:36

robollama wrote:Psh, not gunna even mention me? :tounge2:


Liked it tho. You should put it on YouTube...

Only part that was bad was of course the Em singing part. Rest was dope

oh shit i forgot u were on this site :o

lmao, and yea, the em singing thing was the least spectacular, rest was dope tho :y:

*updates first post*
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Solace » Jan 11th, '10, 03:05

Damn dude you've improved. Though that part where you mimicked Eminem singing was horrid haha, mainly because your flow was horrible on it and it just didnt sound right. And the chorus was a bit iffy it wasnt too bad. Enjoyed the lyrics. That picture of you in the Youtube video is mad dope. Keep at it, your 2010 album should be dope at this rate of improving :y:
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Requiem » Jan 11th, '10, 03:38

Solace wrote:Damn dude you've improved. Though that part where you mimicked Eminem singing was horrid haha, mainly because your flow was horrible on it and it just didnt sound right. And the chorus was a bit iffy it wasnt too bad. Enjoyed the lyrics. That picture of you in the Youtube video is mad dope. Keep at it, your 2010 album should be dope at this rate of improving :y:

major propz man. and yea, i can't sing worth SHIT and i know it. thats why my album will NOT have singing on it :y:
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 11th, '10, 04:22

man, your lyrics :o :o

hahaah youre crazy, this is nuts, but dont make songs like that man hahaha :unsure:
(i mean too explicity)

but keep it up
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby robollama » Jan 11th, '10, 05:57

if you still have the song where you can edit it then i would suggest taking out the singing part. it basically ruins that part of the song. without it the song would be a lot better i think.
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 11th, '10, 07:07

rhyme scheme is sick and inspiring. lyrics too. flows well, delivery perfect. :worship:

the singing part not so good man. prollly because you don't exactly sing. haha.
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jan 11th, '10, 12:53

why the fuck you release a track at 96kbit/s ?!...
umm yeah improved to the certain point...your voice sounds a lil more acceptable...
but the whole track was very uncreative to me...plus mixing was super bad... :sweating:
its wasnt your flow...they werent ur lyrics xcept couple new words...
didnt like...sorry :zipped: :b:
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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Requiem » Jan 11th, '10, 13:32

gutawafang wrote:rhyme scheme is sick and inspiring. lyrics too. flows well, delivery perfect. :worship:

the singing part not so good man. prollly because you don't exactly sing. haha.

thx for checkin it gutawa! and yea, i don't sing.


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Re: Drop the Girl (Drop the World Remix)

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 11th, '10, 13:35

haha i love the lyrics!
nice delivery though :flower:
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