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Geno Vs. Class

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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 11:37

Yes. 8 lines.


Geno called Em for a word-on-the-line, “I’ll put your turd-in-my-shrine
“Come on-G, you got-me so you will not-need a gerbil-this-time”
But he’s disturbed-in-the-mind and got mad-he-wouldn’t-call-back
You’re the only bitch that would name himself after-a-wooden-doll,-fag*
This rapper-is-below; I massacre-Geno in a way that’s sorta-like-carnage
I’ve been-sicker; your battles are "minute men’s-litter"; "borderline-garbage"
This bitch sees-no-hype; he couldn’t get any pussy in three-whole-lives
It’s sure ironic that getting up in a girl’s pants just ain’t the "Geno-type"

*That's what Geno is, google it :coffee:

Don't vote if you don't understand the punches :coffee:

Also don't vote if you were gonna vote for him before you even read the thread
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby Satire » May 24th, '11, 17:14

I'm not even going to vote. I just really don't think anything involving class shouldn't have predetermined judges before initiating.
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby Drug.Ballad » May 24th, '11, 18:20

(3) Punchlines - Class
(3) Personals - Geno
(2) Multies - Class
(1) Flow - Geno
(1) Structure - Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex -NA
(1) Other - NA

5-4 to Class
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby No Way Out » May 24th, '11, 19:27

(3) Punchlines - Tie ....
(3) Personals - Geno
(2) Multies - TIE, Class's were bigger, geno's were smoother
(1) Flow - Geno
(1) Structure - TIE
(1) Vocab/Complex - Class, by a notch
(1) Other - Tie ya'llllllllll

10-8 for Geno

I Can Give Ya'llll some Tips on Punchlines if you want. i don't really battle anymore, i switched my shit up when i crossed over to audio ... but i used to be quite the authority on punchlines for a few years once upon a time.
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

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NWO, for short...

WARNING: This Cute Puppy's Got a Mean Bite ... Im Gonnna Have To Put a Sign on My Sig Or Something.
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby No Way Out » May 24th, '11, 19:27

(3) Punchlines - Tie ....
(3) Personals - Geno
(2) Multies - TIE, Class's were bigger, geno's were smoother
(1) Flow - Geno
(1) Structure - TIE
(1) Vocab/Complex - Class, by a notch
(1) Other - Tie ya'llllllllll

10-8 for Geno

I Can Give Ya'llll some Tips on Punchlines if you want. i don't really battle anymore, i switched my shit up when i crossed over to audio ... but i used to be quite the authority on punchlines for a few years once upon a time.
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

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NWO, for short...

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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 20:21

Satire wrote:I'm not even going to vote. I just really don't think anything involving class shouldn't have predetermined judges before initiating.


I already said we were having predetermined judges lmao. They are just yet to be determined.

NWO is definitely not going to be voting. That clown had one of the worst break downs ever.
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby No Way Out » May 24th, '11, 20:24

classthe_king wrote:
Satire wrote:I'm not even going to vote. I just really don't think anything involving class shouldn't have predetermined judges before initiating.


I already said we were having predetermined judges lmao. They are just yet to be determined.

NWO is definitely not going to be voting. That clown had one of the worst break downs ever.


But he’s disturbed-in-the-mind and got mad-he-wouldn’t-call-back
You’re the only bitch that would name himself after-a-wooden-doll,-fag*

And out Of nowhere... He Uses a Broken Multie To Execute a Lame Punch

Should i furthur elaborate? Tellll me when to stop
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 20:26

No Way Out wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
Satire wrote:I'm not even going to vote. I just really don't think anything involving class shouldn't have predetermined judges before initiating.


I already said we were having predetermined judges lmao. They are just yet to be determined.

NWO is definitely not going to be voting. That clown had one of the worst break downs ever.


But he’s disturbed-in-the-mind and got mad-he-wouldn’t-call-back
You’re the only bitch that would name himself after-a-wooden-doll,-fag*

And out Of nowhere... He Uses a Broken Multie To Execute a Lame Punch

Should i furthur elaborate? Tellll me when to stop


A broken multi? So you think every syllable has to rhyme? Yeah you're experienced. And even if they do...that's still a three syllable multi which is longer than anyone in his whole verse :laughing:

And did he even have a punchline? Tie my ass :laughing:
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby No Way Out » May 24th, '11, 20:34

Mad-he-wouldnt-call-back
After-a-wooden-doll,-fag

Its Broken Homie... and Wouldnt call you back? Don't throw in irrelevent lines just cause its not your main bar ... EVERYTHING should be nice. You Might aswell just leave the filler's out... people don't wanna read half a nice verse, then half of one that makes no sense.

Another Tip for the future : Longer Multies Don't Mean Their better... i did that 3 months after i started, until i figured out it was wack, unless you know what your doing. I Saw One Guy Do it nicely but He was considered one of the best... dudes in grindtime now last i heard. but When your just throwing words into the scheme to make it rhyme ....? Theres no point. ESPECIALLY when you have to jeapardize your lines in order to make them fit. the actual CONTENT of what your writing > big Multies

Homie, Sizzzle
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

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NWO, for short...

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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 20:39

You wanna know what the funniest part about this is though? This is now my 5th battle of all time, why? BECAUSE I DON'T CARE ABOUT BATTLING. I make real music homie, you should try it sometime. Here let's look at your verse

Atleast you don't pay rent when your living in Eminem's Shadow
Give em hell'.. or Death to this IN-FIDEL without.. Entering Castro!?!
Ur in big danger of becoming a CLIFF HANGER like the End of Sopranos,
So Even if you hold on, I'll push SHOW OFF Cause im Better at Battles!
This British Chick's Elizabeth? Well, MY Throne Isn't Doomed to the Queen
Rob Me Forreallyo? the only CROOKED thing about You is your Teeth ( )
She got to spit 8.. I bet shes wishing she got to Actuallly Talk More
Atleast After this Eminem Show, we know not to Ask For The Encore

Act-u-a-lly-talk-more
ask-for-the-en-core

Lol@ you saying something to me about broken multis. And lol @ you talking to me about punchlines. Hop off my dick homie and start to pay attention. You might learn a thing or two
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby Master Chief » May 24th, '11, 20:41

Actually can be pronounced as:

Act-u-lly

Which only has 3 syllables.
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 20:43

Master Chief wrote:Actually can be pronounced as:

Act-u-lly

Which only has 3 syllables.


But that would be pronouncing it wrong :coffee:
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 20:52

See, I'm not mad at all. I wouldn't care if you had the better verse or his breakdown made sense, however it doesn't.
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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby No Way Out » May 24th, '11, 20:54

classthe_king wrote:You wanna know what the funniest part about this is though? This is now my 5th battle of all time, why? BECAUSE I DON'T CARE ABOUT BATTLING. I make real music homie, you should try it sometime. Here let's look at your verse

Atleast you don't pay rent when your living in Eminem's Shadow
Give em hell'.. or Death to this IN-FIDEL without.. Entering Castro!?!
Ur in big danger of becoming a CLIFF HANGER like the End of Sopranos,
So Even if you hold on, I'll push SHOW OFF Cause im Better at Battles!
This British Chick's Elizabeth? Well, MY Throne Isn't Doomed to the Queen
Rob Me Forreallyo? the only CROOKED thing about You is your Teeth ( )
She got to spit 8.. I bet shes wishing she got to Actuallly Talk More
Atleast After this Eminem Show, we know not to Ask For The Encore

Act-u-a-lly-talk-more
ask-for-the-en-core

Lol@ you saying something to me about broken multis. And lol @ you talking to me about punchlines. Hop off my dick homie and start to pay attention. You might learn a thing or two


Lol Butthurt?. Well i was giving you some tips, but that rhyme is a matter of accent bro. If i spit it, it'd fit. Alottta people pronounce "Actually" as 3 syllables, not 4. Either works , it depends how the MC spits it... not the audience. So Unlesss you can prounce "A" with 0 syllables, Its Broken

And far as punchlines... i dumbed down my wordplays/nameplays/Punchlines for audio (Recording Tomorow?) If you want me to.. im SURE i can find one or 2 good punchlines out of the 1000's i've made over the years.
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

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Re: Geno Vs. Class

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '11, 21:00

No Way Out wrote:
classthe_king wrote:You wanna know what the funniest part about this is though? This is now my 5th battle of all time, why? BECAUSE I DON'T CARE ABOUT BATTLING. I make real music homie, you should try it sometime. Here let's look at your verse

Atleast you don't pay rent when your living in Eminem's Shadow
Give em hell'.. or Death to this IN-FIDEL without.. Entering Castro!?!
Ur in big danger of becoming a CLIFF HANGER like the End of Sopranos,
So Even if you hold on, I'll push SHOW OFF Cause im Better at Battles!
This British Chick's Elizabeth? Well, MY Throne Isn't Doomed to the Queen
Rob Me Forreallyo? the only CROOKED thing about You is your Teeth ( )
She got to spit 8.. I bet shes wishing she got to Actuallly Talk More
Atleast After this Eminem Show, we know not to Ask For The Encore

Act-u-a-lly-talk-more
ask-for-the-en-core

Lol@ you saying something to me about broken multis. And lol @ you talking to me about punchlines. Hop off my dick homie and start to pay attention. You might learn a thing or two


Lol Butthurt?. Well i was giving you some tips, but that rhyme is a matter of accent bro. If i spit it, it'd fit. Alottta people pronounce "Actually" as 3 syllables, not 4. Either works , it depends how the MC spits it... not the audience. So Unlesss you can prounce "A" with 0 syllables, Its Broken

And far as punchlines... i dumbed down my wordplays/nameplays/Punchlines for audio (Recording Tomorow?) If you want me to.. im SURE i can find one or 2 good punchlines out of the 1000's i've made over the years.


And the way you flow

Mad he didn't call back
After a wooden doll fag

Rhymes perfectly when you say it lmao

You're so amature bro
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