by RainMan44 » Sep 22nd, '11, 23:43
Love the first 4 lines and the "smell of the smoke/tell, it's a joke" rhyme
Overall, this started good...then had it's good moments and, I wouldn't say "bad," but not so good moments. Not better than other parts.
It was not bad though, good piece to just get momentum buildin' again.
Feed mine?
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"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT