AhdduB - Purple In My Cup

[Ticalrecords]

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me and my friend were fucking around this morning and came up with a quick song. tell me what yall think?


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/purple-in- ... at-lp-prod

[Steve Spag]

Not bad, man. Personally I think the vocals are too loud but other members might disagree with me, during the verse they're not so bad but right when the track starts before you start rapping it's just too overpowering. On to the verse, pretty cool lyrics, nothing really mind blowing but good for the type of track; pretty chill. The beat was cool and you flowed well on it, I think your delivery was a bit choppy at points but solid overall.

Keep it up dude!

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man i appreciate the feedback

[Nick. Y]

"aah I did some good weed" hahah perfect start of the song I think flow and delivery were on point. Lyrics were ok, but I guess you could do a bit better there. Reason I'm sayin this is, cuz as it seems you have some very good presence on a track,so if you come up with something more lyrical, could be even doper. Liked the beat too, that heavy organ was scratching my brain all the way ! Nice job from the producer too

[Words]

A very nice piece. Lyrics, flow beat, everything was technically sound and you had great delivery. Really liked this, it's the first I've heard from you, but judging on this I'd like to see more from you. The only criticism I have is just personal taste. I'm not too big into drugs myself so I tend to just stray away from drug-themed songs because they don't really intrest me as much as other subject matter. But again, that's just my own personal taste, and not really anything to do with the song specifically.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks guys i really appreciate the feedback!