The Fiasco Experiment (Who's In?)

[Fleka]

Slim Fiasco experiment ended badly, face down in excrement
Bring tabasco for supplement quickly, before we go on with the argument
They call me The Doctor, I operate, so I need a clean instrument
Don`t want to infect his his posterior cruciate ligament
When I go frenzy and crazy on this Operate Tournament...

I got lost, I`m at work and there is a bunch of people around me, so it`s hard to concetrate. Would any of you writers make this flow better, I have no experience? Just to show me how to do it?

[Slim Fiasco]

Slim Fiasco experiment ended badly, face down in excrement
Bring tabasco for supplement quickly, before we go on with the argument
They call me The Doctor, I operate, so I need a clean instrument
Don`t want to infect his his posterior cruciate ligament
When I go frenzy and crazy on this Operate Tournament...

I got lost, I`m at work and there is a bunch of people around me, so it`s hard to concetrate. Would any of you writers make this flow better, I have no experience? Just to show me how to do it?

Haha, well basically you need to make the lines to have about the same length, and to end them in a rhyme obviously. When you write to a beat, usually the rhymes fall on the 2nd snare of a bar so that's how you determine the length. When you don't do it to a beat, you can choose your own length. See how it flows when you try to say it, and you'll know if you're comfortable with the length.

[Slim Fiasco]

I'm feeding every verse on midnight since that's the only time of today ill be free. and oh if tomorrow's subject is my choice I'm gonna pick something later.

Sounds good. And yeah, you decide for tomorrow's topic.

[SG.]

Perhaps you should provide links for all the pieces in here.

[Slim Fiasco]

Perhaps you should provide links for all the pieces in here.

Yeah I guess I can add them in the original post after each day is done. But don't worry about people noticing it, I'm sure all the participants are checking out the creative writing section, if nothing else, it's the rules that presuppose that.

[SG.]

It's more for outsiders, who aren't in the CW section.
Maybe they'll see this and stick around.

[Slim Fiasco]

Gotcha, I'll be adding the links each day then.

[Slim Fiasco]

Yo, the verse I was writing for today is all about a story about females. Fuck you man! lol.

That sorta screws me up, Fiasco, would I be allowed to use the verse I'm writing today and finish it tomorrow then, and write something totally new for today?

Hey, I just saw this. Well, I don't man, feel free to do whatever. As long as you aren't cheating with no reason, I'm fine with it.

[B.A.D.]

Just wanted to stop by and say good idea and great job. Thanks

[Slim Fiasco]

Just wanted to stop by and say good idea and great job. Thanks

Thanks man. It's great that it benefits more people and that we feed off each other.

[dR3]

Man that's such a great idea, I can asure you this will cement your place as one of the best members of this forum.

I haven't written anything in almost a year but I'll try to keep up as much as I can. I may not drop each day since I'm not a regular writer, but I'll definitely try.

Count me in, I guess?

[Slim Fiasco]

Man that's such a great idea, I can asure you this will cement your place as one of the best members of this forum.

I haven't written anything in almost a year but I'll try to keep up as much as I can. I may not drop each day since I'm not a regular writer, but I'll definitely try.

Count me in, I guess?

Haha, thank you брат And yeah, you can definitely hop in on this. I can always make an exception for you, our country is based on double standards anyway. Looking forward to your pieces!

[Slim Fiasco]

Will probably get to writing in about a half hour and drop soon. Girls right? This'll be good.

Edit - There's a storm in my area, so if my power goes out I might not be able to drop until later. Just a heads up.

No problem Geno, do so when you can.

[Mr.DGAF]

Seeing all these pieces gets me anxious to start writing again. Hopefully I'll be ready tomorrow.

[SG.]

The topic for Day 3 is: Role-Play.

Basically, rap from someone else's perspective, be it a humble stranger or a historical figure.

I'll feed all the Day 2 pieces tomorrow.