Redzek - Man UP ( ft Big Ax-D)

[Le Tunisien]

okay this is a track from "No Shame" Tape for those who didnt hear it,here is one track off it.
check it out...and guys better Stay tuned for big ax-d 's new album its comming soon


Hear my track here: http://limelinx.com/bcg7k


Lyrics:

[Bridge: Big ax-D (+Redzek) ]

you cant break me down
cuz im just too strong now
and you know that i wont go
but i hope that you still know

[Verse 1: Big Ax-D]
dude wtf, this lyrics are not correct
[i]edit by: B.A.D.

[Hook: Big Ax-D (+Redzek)]

im done oh im just done
you could never be the one
cuz all you ever did was run
why'd you come around me?
dumb..thats what i am
but i dont even give a damn
cuz i know that i remain a man
and i say it proudly

[Verse 2 : Redzek]

i Never Gave a fuck about what a pimp does,
cuz i rather thug love than a shit hug
i get fuzzed it is just cuz i spit drugs
nobody is iller than me im too sick,no clinics
i want y'all to admit it,ydont you go forget it
i heard its worse in the third verse
i hurt and curse even murk with words
i lure girls and birds to a certain world
the curtains thirst occur with nervous nerves
the first to flirt with dirt will deserves the earth
man my heart aches ,and not hard to break
so i start to shake from the scars it takes
the bars i make are simply too smart to hate
i'll take you as a mother my brother and i will fuck you
cuz i am a motherfucker who dont even trust dudes
i must do what i must do its just true

[Hook: Big Ax-D (+Redzek)]

im done oh im just done
you can never be the one
cuz all you ever did was run
why'd you come around me?
dumb..thats what i am
but i dont even give a damn
cuz i know that i remain a man
and i say it proudly

[Verse 3 : Redzek]

yeah i got a dozen of cousins that i am cussin,
it doesnt,mean that im fuzzin and bluffin for nothin muffins!
i wanna kill it,revive it and then just kill it again
you all are a bunch of kids and i aint kiddin you friends,
you better take off shoes if you really wanna stare at me
wash your hands before you point a finger at me,ill be happy
pappy's snappy so he sadly slaps me with a puppy,that is crappy!
im truthfull
if Mr love knew how much i fuckin love you
then he surely wouldv wanted to be my lover too
arghh tfouuu for those who said i couldnt spit
im a sick prick,bitch you will get ad-dicted
i did split a trick,just to be like TRICK-TRICK
and if you dont understand then you better sit quick
they say..to break a broken heart is not human
its okay..im not a human being, im just being human
and..i mean im Rulin !
haha

[Outro: Big Ax-D (+Redzek)]

im dumb..thats what i am
but i dont even give a damn
cuz i know that i remain a man
and i say it proudly[/i]




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[Trimss]

I think you sound like that on a lot of tracks so you might switch your style up from times to times. It wasn't bad though.

Ax-D killed the hook and that bridge. no lie. I had some problems understanding what you say, sometimes it felt like the beat was louder.

Good effort.

[Le Tunisien]

I think you sound like that on a lot of tracks so you might switch your style up from times to times. It wasn't bad though.

Ax-D killed the hook and that bridge. no lie. I had some problems understanding what you say, sometimes it felt like the beat was louder.

Good effort.

thanks for the feedback, i know i dont switch up my style often but thats my style thats how i do it..i might change sometimes in next songs then...and for ax's bridge i thought the singing was dope

[Joel Venom]

i agree with the feedback above, switching up the flow would help a ton with your delivery but the song was good nonetheless tbh, just try and fix up a bit of ish

[FxTDilz]

i agree with the feedback above, switching up the flow would help a ton with your delivery but the song was good nonetheless tbh, just try and fix up a bit of ish

agreed with this, also im not the biggest fan of the hook? maybe try spend a bit more time on lyrics? but its still better than a lot of other shit i've heard haha, keep it up

[yung rom]

i thought this was great! your rapping was really good, but if i was u i would try doing even more syllables at certain times (i noticed sometimes you had three-syllable rhymes and other times u only had 2-syllable ones). But overall, it was really good! Loved big ax-d's singing and the beat too (presuming u guys made it). Just one thing though, i would say at certain times u should rap/sing with him (big ax-d) when he does the hook, but other times just let him do it himself. So like maybe do the first chorus both of u and then let him do it himself. I just felt it was unnecessary when it happened more than once and didn't really add to the song. But overall, great job, I loved it!

[mdemaz]

Sick track, guys.

I mixed a Eedee verse on one of Red's songs a while ago, and Red was ok, but, there was problems there that are present here.

The slammed vocal sound sounds pretty sick most of the time, but, my only suggestion, is to maybe clean up your vocal mixing a bit, Red; sometimes it sounds really chaotic and it makes it difficult for the listener to understand what you are saying.
On the contrary, it does give it a really warm feel.

Try to balance it out.
Make the second layer softer.

Cheers mate.

Big Ax is always fun to listen to.

[Kez]

I still need to leave feed for your tape. I will try and get to it. I just had work a lot lately.

[Le Tunisien]

thank you guys for all the comments , i really appreciated them

mdemaz i should ask you to mix to songs sometimes haha

kez yeah definetly ill be waiting for your feeback and i understand im getting busy as well...

and thanks to all of you guys,y'all appreciated ..thank you !

[Eedee]

I heard this, I think. This was on your last mixtape, right? The one I was on?

Anyway, dope song. You two always bring the best out of each other, and it's awesome you two sound alike LOL

On your normal songs, as Demaz said, your vocals are really contorted and layered, layered so badly that it jumbles everything.

Anyway, love the song, dude. Beat is awesome, too!!

[Le Tunisien]

I heard this, I think. This was on your last mixtape, right? The one I was on?

Anyway, dope song. You two always bring the best out of each other, and it's awesome you two sound alike LOL

On your normal songs, as Demaz said, your vocals are really contorted and layered, layered so badly that it jumbles everything.

Anyway, love the song, dude. Beat is awesome, too!!

thanks bro yeah its on the tape....ill post more songs off the tape thanks for checking