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Does anyone write like this

Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Just Silver » Jun 5th, '13, 00:25

I mix it up but sometimes
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby J.R. » Jun 5th, '13, 00:29

well I have transitional rhymes, meaning I have this pattern

A...................A

A.....................B

B......................C

C......................C

C....................D


and so on, it makes it flow better in my opinion. Here's an example:

Ball drops..............Y'all stop,
False? Not..............Lyrical genius,
I mean this............June fifth,
new shit................lose it,
room gets...............catch up to my lyrical slaughter,
when I drop these bombs, you best be nearin some water

That's how I usually do it, although I tend not to fill in the lines as I lose focus
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Just Silver » Jun 5th, '13, 00:46

I feel middle rhymes are just as important as ending
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 5th, '13, 01:46

I just write honestly. I get like an idea and just go with it. I almost never worry about rhyming anymore. It just kinda comes out. Before though, I used to do intense multi patterns and put the message around it.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Sam. » Jun 5th, '13, 19:48

You can always right a mini draft with basic rhymes and then go back and complicate it. I do it some times, and let me tell, it's really good. You can work on the phrasing, too.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby CrashBand » Jun 5th, '13, 23:11

I do that for the multi cypher.

Or quickly in my head if I'm freestyling.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby J.R. » Jun 5th, '13, 23:36

Like someone else said, that's why you have middle rhymes and beginning rhymes. It's a transitional process, your end rhymes have to change some where
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby TonyTilt » Jun 6th, '13, 00:25

Speak of this, I've been the last to reply to the multi cypher for fucking weeks now!!!!!!!!
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Sam. » Jun 6th, '13, 19:41

Writing end rhymes is best shortcut to get things done quickly.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby CanadaPure » Jun 6th, '13, 20:05

Menzo wrote:I don't have a writing style, if I think about it. It just sorta...happens. The page is usually a mess of random ideas, words and rhymes and eventually it'll make its way to a verse.


I do this too.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Francesco » Jun 7th, '13, 00:07

I usually let it go naturally & always start writing after I have an idea or a few packed lines in my head already.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Eedee » Jun 23rd, '13, 03:43

Pretty much what DGAF said, I just write and the rhymes come to me as I write. It's more like a train of thought piece which rhymes. Then I go back and edit it for phrasing and shit and maybe add some more syllables in there and shit. Usually I put the beat on replay and just write and check what I wrote works then carry on.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Eedee » Jun 23rd, '13, 04:00

Hope it all helps.
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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby Atone » Jul 4th, '13, 20:14

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Re: Does anyone write like this

Postby CrashBand » Jul 4th, '13, 20:34

It depends what you're writing as well. If you have a very hard hitting punchline that you love, you will often think o the filler set-up afterwards.
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