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Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

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Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Spyder » Jun 11th, '13, 02:52

LOF

Spyder/Silver

Acidic backdrops backflippin into a melted seat of a matchbox
Battle with the catalysts, ignite fire every batch hot
Lookin for a match ock? 'Picture' how I snap shots

Snap my shot elastic with an automatic spastic
Japanese squeezing off twin dragons with army hazards
I am hardly spazzin, armored bandwagon, your target practice.
'two 40s' in my hands spin me 180, for sure we soundly won
but I don’t need 'three 60s' to wrap circles 'round these fucks.

I'm all around these fucks like some circular dicks
They don't make any sense like a virgin with tits
Some herb and a fifth turns to my verbal defense
I'm always on top like the birds on the fence
Back at the murder mission vodka squirts of Simpson
Alotta bad intentions you get choked in mid suspension
My audio probably blow your whole body though, Ill intentions
Rhymin mutant seekin spinal fluid, get that thing your ribs connect with.
Sick infection double entendres with lil inflections, give a mis-direction
So you 'flop' on your chance to 'come' like a missed-erection!

I missed selection and fired my entire collection
Of Smith and Wesson weapons have you dead in seconds
expect to be breathless lungs cut into fine fragments
We blow up like the young saddam and fire crackers
Silver and purple on that white boy fire crackers
Violent addicts try and snort your entire matter,
Why's it matter? We great kid, its still the fact
Frankly you 'ape shit' if you think I don't got Silver back!

I got Spyders back like that red hourglass
never striking fast never foul with the math
Only foul with the words like pitchers mask
I pitch it fast I make the world skip at bat
nah flip it back, watch me as I play this game
take my wood and balls, baby take first base
stealin second I’m takin brain third is anal play,
home stretch 'come into the catcher' fuckin SAY MY NAME.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '13, 04:27

i liked how we pieced this together literally day by day
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Francesco » Jun 11th, '13, 09:12

I love that back to back kind of rhyming... both were solid as usual too. :y:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '13, 20:25

Dope. Spyder killed it, but dude, that 'missed-erection' line is so played out and corny. JS tried hard, real hard to get that vibe that Spyder had, but you were nowhere near. You were on an altogether different level. That's okay, it doesn't make it bad, does it? Nahh! After the 'missed-erection' line the whole thing felt like an actual collab, till then it felt that you guys just played separately written bars together. The mixing of concept and the connection was good after the line.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '13, 20:34

yea i sorta slacked with my wordplay and stuff not on purpose its more that i thought of it too much but thanks for the feed guy
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '13, 20:36

Just Silver wrote:yea i sorta slacked with my wordplay and stuff not on purpose its more that i thought of it too much but thanks for the feed guy

What?
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '13, 20:39

Sam. wrote:
Just Silver wrote:yea i sorta slacked with my wordplay and stuff not on purpose its more that i thought of it too much but thanks for the feed guy

What?

i tried to base some parts on wordplay so much it didnt work with my focused efforts as well as if a did a freeverse
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '13, 20:43

Just Silver wrote:
Sam. wrote:
Just Silver wrote:yea i sorta slacked with my wordplay and stuff not on purpose its more that i thought of it too much but thanks for the feed guy

What?

i tried to base some parts on wordplay so much it didnt work with my focused efforts as well as if a did a freeverse

Indeed, the effort were clearly visible. Keel trying. :y:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Spyder » Jun 11th, '13, 21:24

thanks for the feed sam, he and i are seeing something

what do u make of his virgin with tits line
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '13, 22:17

Spyder wrote:thanks for the feed sam, he and i are seeing something

what do u make of his virgin with tits line

Lmao the debate of that line :b:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '13, 22:27

Spyder wrote:thanks for the feed sam, he and i are seeing something

Seeing what? :o

Spyder wrote:what do u make of his virgin with tits line

No sense? :unsure:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '13, 22:28

Sam. wrote:
Spyder wrote:thanks for the feed sam, he and i are seeing something

Seeing what? :o

Spyder wrote:what do u make of his virgin with tits line

No sense? :unsure:

Damn lol that's what spyder said too :sweating:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '13, 22:31

Damn, son, if that's true. ^
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Folie A Duex

Postby Just Silver » Jun 11th, '13, 22:33

Sam. wrote:Damn, son, if that's true. ^

It made sense to me lol we kept it as an experiment  :zipped:
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Postby Sam. » Jun 11th, '13, 22:34

What it means doe?
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