Square One
I love the intro to this haha, that beat is sinister. Opening scheme is sick, I see you shouting out my song with Dimes (Picture Frame), appreciate it mane. That was cool. I would slap a bitch too, this is a sick verse. You sound really, really confident. Flow slipped just a little but you recovered it quickly. Demaz has a nice hook, I think you sound a little less confident than usual, Idk why. Maybe just me, or may have just been that take or something because you sound much better on the verse. I quite enjoyed the verse; I like the kick the bucket line haha. Flow and clarity are a lot better than some of your older stuff. Dilz had a really good verse; I actually dig your delivery here. Sounded a bit more aggressive than usual, which is something I’ve been wanting from your stuff. Good job mane. Solid intro to the mixtape Bro Namath.
Hamartia
That fall asleep/nauseously scheme and flow was quite nice dude. That was a stick out for the first verse. I like the hook too, really upfront and honest. I suppose I should be expecting that though haha. The ambitious, I know scheme is nice too. There’s spurts of your rapping on this track that sounds just so comfortable, you’ve really stepped into your own as a rapper. Your flow is a bit crazy but it’s unique and sounds pretty good so I can’t complain tbh. I have no complaints with this song.
Pens with a Purpose
My favorite song off the mixtape yo. And that’s an honest opinion. I absolutely love this song haha. You have a great start to the track; flow’s tight and you sound laid back and mellow on the beat. Which fits quite well. The little interlude with milk is dope doe. Dimes killed the hook, fits the style of song perfectly. Mat did a great job mixing this too. And then damn. That last guy came in and killed it. Shit. This mixtape should have ended right after that verse, because wow. It was so good. But really, I think personally my delivery could’ve been a bit more emotional, this was recorded probably a month ago and I feel like I’ve improved even more in that category. Solid song hoes.
Give Me Time
I wasn’t a fan of the know the planet spins scheme but that’s my only problem with the first verse. It kind of throws the flow off a bit, and even though you’ve got some intricate rhyme schemes in there, it just doesn’t sound too pleasing. Technically it’s impressive, just was kinda weird on my ears. You redeemed it with that scheme to end the verse though, that was really fucking cool. I like the second verse personally, I know Dilz keeps telling you to stop rapping about the same girl haha so that line about the thirty songs to prove that line really hit me. That was cool. The third verse is fucking dope. Flow wise and delivery wise it’s my favorite. The getting slept on line is a bit off flow wise but delivery makes up for it, and the be awesome line is really cool. That’s my favorite line haha, it’s such a stand out line in terms of how serious the song is and then how playful that comment was. As for the hook, jesus. Someone should sign that guy. He killed the last song and then shows up on the hook and gets all melodic and shit. Wow.
Looking Back
Dilz, powerful lyrics man. I really felt that verse tbh. I don’t really have anything to say about this one, it’s a good verse dude. The hook is dope, Shortii’s got some chops. She’s got a very unique voice, took me a minute to get used to it but then it connected. Eedee, I really dig your verse dude. Probably my favorite on the song. I remember you telling my about the story and all, and it really hit me. You’ve got some serious balls (and a beard) to just rap about close shit like this all the time. Wow, the last guy. I have to say, his delivery is a bit better than on PWAP. Sounds more passionate. He must’ve seen the feed I left on that song. Got a good flow too. I get the feeling this verse is about the same person as in PWAP, so he should probably stop rapping about that stupid fucking bitch and move on or something. Eh.
I Will Rise
This song has an epic feel. You’ve got a solid frame for flow on this one, but it slips a bit in the beginning. Your voice sounds super dope on this too, I dunno how to say it. This beat is seriously something else man, so damn good. Picks up on the hook and you match it, I love that shit. The schemes on the second verse is impressive dude, I like the internals on the same bar. The what’s the point scheme is dope too man. Dang. Third verse lyrics wise is dope as shit. The flow is a bit iffy but the beat drop is dope, I like the set up to that point and then it comes back into you rising again.
Victorious
Your flow on this is really smooth. Almost can’t even tell your rapping, you mimic the beat so well. I really dig this beat too, so uplifting. Sounds kinda like a Toy Story theme, which is fine because toy story is fucking AMAZING. Eedee getting Woody on us (get it).
Thanks for having me on it, and can't wait for Going Forward to get released.
